NinetyThreeDegrees
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NinetyThreeDegrees9mthCommentedShe*Get the right pronouns
Fairy Yun Ruo froze. He had intended to let Jiang Hao take the fall but realized that there was no one there. It was too late for her to turn around. A dagger flashed and stabbed her in the neck.- NinetyThreeDegrees10mthCommentedCh 279 Attack
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The novel keeps propping up this Ryu guy but doesn't give him any push back. The scene im reading right now is boring. Tge part where Elena keeps praising Ryu to high heaven is a classic mistake that some author make in writing. Its show not tell. If you keep telling people about his achievments instead of showing them it makes the story infinitly more boring.
To the side, while Zephyr displayed a fiercer anger than Gale, Lacus' eyes shone with a sparkle of intelligence as he calmly gazed toward Ryu. 'This Ryu… Why does he seem so unfathomable?' - NinetyThreeDegrees2yrCommented
figuratively speaking
As soon as Mondo finished speaking, his underling beside him began to hug his thigh and agree. - NinetyThreeDegrees2yrCommented
I agree need to use his because the dragon is male if you use her that would indicate the dragon is female which it is not.
Max circled the rock twice, curled up around her sister, and fell into a deep sleep. - NinetyThreeDegrees2yrCommentedCh 5 Evolution Again
- NinetyThreeDegrees2yrCommentedCh 40 The Perfume that Shocked Everyone
- NinetyThreeDegrees2yrCommentedCh 40 The Perfume that Shocked Everyone
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its been upgraded to rage
As for the next form after Anger, which was Bargaining, was a form that was similar to the Sanction form of the [Nut Trident Triad], being able to shoot a lot of Spirit Spears within a short span of time. - NinetyThreeDegrees2yrReplied to The_Adventurer
maybe angels are gender fluid ?
Why was he acting like a little girl in Love? - NinetyThreeDegrees2yrReplied to M_W
Well watching different types of media could help and or reading different books could also assist you in getting some ideas for example: 1. Spectacular Spiderman 2. Young Justice 3. Samurai Jack 4. Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles (2003) 5. Percy Jackson 6. Psyren 7. Marvel Movies (MCU) 8. Rosario + Vampire 9. Hellsing Ultimate 10. Tegami Bachi Heck You can also play video games 1. Megaman Zero series/zx 2. The World Ends With You 3. Persona 3 4 5 Ect....
(Author's note: I'm currently experiencing a Author's Block right now, so I can only update 1 chapter a day in order for the released chapters not to catch up on the novel's stock chapters, which is currently at chapter 144 right now. I will do my best to pull myself back together as soon as possible. So until then, I hope for your patience and understanding, and thank you very much, heheheh! HAPPY READING!) - NinetyThreeDegrees2yrReplied to The_Divine_Author
I feel you yow kinda oozes painful vibes
"Yow!" Evangelion greeted as soon as Leo walked inside the study room. - NinetyThreeDegrees2yrReplied to Maginus_Sama
if you don't mind me asking what the actual saying is ?
"Is this perhaps what they called as; when a pie fell from the sky, although you'll be able to catch it, you will still feel the pain from its silver plate hitting your hand really hard, or something similar...?" Leo thought to himself. Although the Honoris Noble Household had given him a total of 110,000 points, but trouble was surely going to follow him starting from now. - NinetyThreeDegrees2yrCommented
if I can recall yow is another meaning for ouch
"Yow!" Leo quickly greeted before sitting down on his chair. - NinetyThreeDegrees2yrCommented
all that from a single interaction i know that happens in real life sometimes but wow just wow
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oh sure when the protagonist does it its fine but when someone else does it its creepy
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oh sure when the protagonist does it its fine but when someone else does it its creepy
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isn't that a bit vain though ? And again it depends on a person depending on geography, Culture, religion and personality people might react in a different way using the same rating system over and over again will make the story repetative and boring.
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