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Kvothe_the_wind2mthCommented"My name is Edrin," the blonde girl corrected.- Kvothe_the_wind2mthReplied to JALLEN
Then use karma or whatever to judge the worthy. With your game, your world will welcome psychopaths.
"But it won't be random. Instead of randomly choosing who will go, we'll play a fun little game. Oh, sorry, I almost forgot, a fun little deadly game." - Kvothe_the_wind2mthPosted
The MC in this novel is so dumb it's infuriating. He says he should keep a low profile but he shows off everywhere. He is also very arrogant. He is a psychopath. In short, he has no qualities. I wouldn't mind if he dies in the novel. As for his system, it's just too broken. He can get unlimited talents. Those talents are also broken. And the way to get talent is completely random so luck decides MC's fate. It would have been better if the system had more limit and MC had a choice on talents. This way he could have shown his wit. Here, it's a lottery so he can't plan his own evolution. I stopped after a few chapter after the pay wall. It became too idiotic.
- Kvothe_the_wind2mthCommentedThey wanted to kidnap him. Probably because he is so handsome, I mean who can blame them? With a face like William's, anyone that sold him would make quite the profit. William was somewhat flattered.
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Yes because having ten elemental talent, a lot of passive talent, etc... is very well balanced.
Things are getting a bit expensive now. William was starting to understand when the System said it wasn't unbalanced. Upgrading his Manamatus title was nearly impossible without a few thousand Potential Points, so William would need to hunt quite a few beasts. - Kvothe_the_wind2mthCommented
Congratulations author. You manage to create the most idiotic antagonistic situation in a novel. The MC is now ennemy with the city because he didn't want to show proof of identity.
The old man didn't plan to give William a way out. He smiled sinisterly while keeping his Ice Spike trained on William. "You have no choice on this. Come with us or die." - Kvothe_the_wind2mthCommented
Then, what the use of a cultivation technique? Once he has the talent won't he have all knowledge about cultivation in his mind?
-The Host cannot Cultivate. The Talent "Cultivation" is not learned. - Kvothe_the_wind2mthCommented
He is wearing an Array master robe and the shop attendant speaks about status?
The old man was confused, but then smiled after understanding something. "You must be a Manamatus then, yes we have a few of these techniques, but not at this shop. You'll have to go to our main store, which is a few kilometers down the road. It's located in the Inner City though, so you'll need to have the appropriate status to enter." the old man gave William the directions to their main store. - Kvothe_the_wind2mthCommented
Arrogant much?
"You've harassed me a bit too much today. I will let you off the hook, but do not come for me again in the future. Your guard was too weak so I killed him on accident, I hope you can let this matter slide." - Kvothe_the_wind2mthCommented
A cop pulled you over and you don't cooperate. You look suspicious and appear to be dangerous. He took out his gun and you kill him. Are you not a criminal? Now, not only is he dumb but he is also a psychopath. The more I read about the MC, the less I like him. Does he have any qualities ?
Huh? I still lost Humanity. I suppose that's because the guard only meant to teach me a lesson or throw me in jail, not to kill me. William was a bit disappointed, but he didn't let that bother him. He turned to another guard and launched a fist in his direction, albeit weaker than the previous. - Kvothe_the_wind2mthReplied to Nikhil_Bannerjee
Yes but you need to verify. Maybe he wrote about a new spell or maybe just about his daily life. You can't know without reading
"Boring!" William did not plan to read the journal. He cleared out the remainder of the Space Ring, then placed everything back. The ring belonged to him now, so William planned to use it as such. - Kvothe_the_wind2mthCommented
For the life of him, he can't make an intelligent decision.
At this point, Elder Ren didn't even know what to say. Why is the world so unfair?!? He's also a Manamatus, what can't this kid do? - Kvothe_the_wind2mthCommented
Yes, just show unbelievable talent to people you don't know. They won't be jealous of you and try to get rid of you. Everyone is such a nice person in the Cultivation world.
William created a Basic Strength Rune in the air. "Is this enough to pass?" - Kvothe_the_wind2mthCommented
How can it be his first time. It's like reading a book before learning the alphabet. It's impossible. Unless everyone can have the Array Talent (like people have magic talent) and have the knowledge in their mind just like the MC.
"Wow! A new talent has joined our Array Hall, how long has it been?" the Elder remembered that William claimed it was his first time with Arrays and he was just testing things out. No one would have expected William to achieve the highest score possible. - Kvothe_the_wind2mthReplied to Kotik_Kotik
Nope it's easy with enough time. It's like learning 300 kanjis, something billions of people did in school.
William continued listing the Runes. By the 5 minute mark, William had already read off 200 Runes without looking at the other side. His Array Talent was no joke. The Elder had even gone silent, as William just read off the record-breaking number of Runes without consulting the other side of the paper. - Kvothe_the_wind2mthCommented
It's the easiest test of all time. You just flip the paper at the start and neber flip it back. Then you just have to copy the answers one by one. It should count as one flip.
At this moment the Elder spoke again, "Take a seat, the test will begin after I explain the rules. Your task is to name as many of these Runes as possible. Point at the Rune, then say its function. On the other side of the paper, I have listed their names, however you can only flip the paper one time. The passing score is 30, and your score is doubled if you don't flip the paper at all." - Kvothe_the_wind2mthReplied to Flu1902JNB
Yes, what's the use of having a master? Just skip the test and upgrade your talent.
More knowledge filled William's brain. He instantly memorized over 150 different Runes. He also learned that you could combine Runes of different categories as long as they were compatible with each other. With this, William would be able to combine Strength and Speed Runes in an Array to create an Array of Power. - Kvothe_the_wind2mthCommented
It's a talent not knowledge. He should be able to learn faster not have the knowledge. It's stupid.
William's head began to hurt again as he learned many different skills one at a time. The knowledge of different cooking methods, temperature control, and ingredients flooded his brain. - Kvothe_the_wind2mthCommented
They can heal the dead? Impressive. Why not healing them BEFORE they die?
With only one opponent left, it wasn't even ten seconds before the battle was over. The two dead Cultivators' bodies were pulled back together by a complex array and healed completely.