Parz5

See this! I just gifted the story: Luxury car

Truly thank you Aoki. You’re awesome, this story is awesome, I can’t wait to see what you cook up next!! ❤️❤️❤️

thank God. no more long a.s.s note after the chapter. hopefully that's permanently gone.

bro. stop the F U C K I N G long a.s.s notes. youre jacking up the price of the chapter by padding the word count. my God is it annoying to hear the same dang note after EVERY chapter.

Another social credit story. All, we’re #1 and racist af to everyone else. This could’ve been such a cool story too.. such a shame. Glad the awful writing cropped up before I paid for any chapters.

Wait, so learning something that can directly affect the soul is allowed, but having silver grade or above equipment is illegal??????? How does that even make sense? The universal rule of FAFO would take care of people acting up with high level equipment. Why is there a difference between spells (which CANT be seen on a mages body) and a big a*s sword that would be plenty visible on a warrior?? This is sus and probably just bad writing. Some time needs to be taken to resolve this inconsistency.

Oh but they couldn’t do that for ichigos fight? Small continuity slip.. meant to drive plot forward. I get it, but kendo should be afraid, alone, no one able to help him before he’s completely broken.

This is RAPIDLY becoming contrived stupidity (the trope about characters being obnoxiously stupid in order to drive plot forward). Please God let this stupidity end at this chapter. I can’t keep reading if it goes on any longer. You have to BALANCE how much stupidity there is. You have to know when to end the cycle of retardation and I’m about to drop this book because it’s going on too long.

Aoki can’t keep getting away with all these CLIFFS. I’m afraid of heights!

How am I supposed to connect with this mc? How am I supposed to cheer him on and want him to do well? He’s got a gambling problem and stole a ton of money from the person he works for. That’s trash behavior no matter how you slice it.. idk if I can get into this book. I’ll try a few more chapters even though I’ve started out kinda hating the mc.