MasterGodKing101

Just not worth it for a fanfic. You expect so much but get so little. Nobody would act like the mc in their situation. I'm sorry they just wouldn't.

Not worth! Mc doesn't at all act like he is from a higher dimension and the reason given is because he is old and thats fair. But its also boring. Basically the mc never actually got an advantage bc of his knowledge. And now later in the series he barely even shows up. Dropped,

more popularity and views so it gets translated quicker.

This is my first review ever, so cut me some slack please. This fanfiction is interesting because of the way the original author setup the MC's cheat and his outlook on life. I don't want to spoil too much of course, being that Im about 600+ chapters into the mtl. I think maybe its just my brain has been so thoroughly broken by so many of these novels, but I do recommend you read this story because it’s really good/fun and the translator is doing a really good job. Now that means the story doesn’t have its own problems. There occasionally some details that make no sense whatsoever but those are in the mtl later down the line anyway and they are minor. Things like a green lantern ring with no mention of a battery to charge it, thors hammer breaking and then…… showing up again later fixed….without explanation….. but nothing that made me say ‘cmon! What?!? What?!! This makes no sense at all and my day is ruined!!’ because there not that crucial to the story. I’m not sure why the translator changed the name of the novel, and I don’t really care but at 600+ chapters Gwen is simply not the only female-lead anymore. So, the title isn’t wrong but *Spoiler* Wanda and Hela and Red Queen(is what I call the MC’s AI, sometimes its queen red but red queen sounds nicer imo) do start appearing more frequently and make their attraction obvious not to just the MC but also to everyone. And Hela seems to undergo some serious character development. Yes, I know I just said character development on a female-lead AND yes, it’s because of love, but I still really do enjoy her transformation from total butcher to some actual introspection. Her past is kind of sad when you think about it objectively. Does she want eternal war? No, but she is happy to wage war on all of existence because it will end with her ruling everything and then there will be no more war forever. This mindset is what Odin raised her on, so she sees it as fine. Though even after changing, her pride does still make her have a zero-tolerance policy for anyone who mocks or slander her or the MC. So, she is definitely not some angel all of a sudden. However, not every problem requires death and the sword to be solved. Sometimes death and sword can solve said problem, but in the wake of using it you’ve just created more problems for yourself. And also, the whole family and friends can help you out instead of being completely alone trope. Think of it like this: she is alone and no has been good enough in her eyes till the MC and now she has someone to lean on and in that process learns the ability to listen to other people opinions without immediately removing their heads for not knowing their place. I’m focusing on the Hela a lot, but she really is basically the 2nd female-lead(and obviously is stronger than Gwen) and is a big part of the story. And that is also really the foundation of the MC’s personality. He is rational, as much as he can be. He doesn’t have super cosmic awareness. He doesn’t know everything about marvel and as he intervenes, he understands that his actions have an effect, so he is losing that future knowledge cheat as time passes. But at the end of the day, he acts like a human. He likes earth and that’s his home. He doesn’t want to live anywhere else, nor is he interested in ruling earth from the shadows or the spotlight or any world for that matter. He wants to live his life in peace and yes it will require him to plan and fight the big villains in marvel. I absolutely love that the MC has the Red Queen(mc’s version of J.A.R.V.I.S) bc it gets rid of a lot of the slice of life parts that are just not that interesting in a fan fiction. And it realistically is the only way that the MC can hide is identity on earth and do some of the things that MC does on earth. And when it hacks into tony suit and forcibly connect the MC calls it’s always funny to see Tony’s reaction. But all in all, it’s really fun to read. Like I said before, somethings require a little disbelief(basically small plot holes) and if you are reading this then also, I must stress this very clearly. The MC intervenes in his new world before the some of the mcu heroes’ movies. This Tony is not even close to mcu Tony(mcu tony sends the nuke through the portal, is haunted by ‘knowledge’, ultimate sacrifice) and same for some of the other heroes and characters. Some are almost the same and some have been influenced by the MC greatly. For example, Tony gets the inspiration of his suit from having seen the MC armor/mecha/suit so he kind of looks up to the MC’s hero persona. Now if that bothers you, that some of the characters will basically worship the MC hero persona bc he keeps coming in clutch, then you won’t like this story. Now I realize that I’m reviewing the story mostly(and that I’m 600ch into it) and not so much the translation, but I don’t really know webnovels ‘Chinese fan-fiction translations’ review etiquette and like I said this is my first review ever. I have zero complaints about the translation. It certainly got me hooked. But I do really enjoy the story and want more people to read it hence creating more popularity, so it gets translated faster.