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The main character is so dumb. Also it seems like you killed off the parents just to remove any attachments he might have.He can read and write, and should be good at basic stuff like maths, so him becoming a farmer makes no sense.Also the 7 years of no quests is more that you hadn't planned for that long, so you made a literal quest reward not even be a reward, since it's just his supervisor in a box...Seems like you are just writing with no direction or planning.
Nuke is way too strong. A hydrogen bomb like the Tsar Bomba can literally wipe out many cities. you can literally nuke the city next to him, and it would be too late for him to do anything. he would just be vaporized into nothing before he realized that the nuke had gone off.
There is literally a tool called Prometheus for monitoring application containers...
I agree. This story has so many inconsistencies. He only has one friend, and is antisocial, and even the friend he has he treats badly and doesn't care about her feelings. why would such a person agree to be a leader of a random village. Moreover a village that tried to kidnap him to use as a sacrifice. And in under 24 hours of even appearing in the planet. He literally got the power to travel at the speed of light. He can go to any place in the planet in a second.
Normally that would be true, but in your system, quests can give stats directly, so it no longer matters. Instead, completing as many quests as possible at a high rank matters more.
Dude has lots of points and isn't even using them. No wonder his wisdom is so low.
Mmost of this doesn't make sense, since he has AOE. if he needs money, he can just create bricks of gold and sell them. why does he need to buy shares then? Also, since he can create the potion, why isn't he creating more that can increase his mana reserves. AOE can literally make any thing you can imagine. so if you imagine a potion that can increase your mana pool, it will make it.