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    Hey man, thanks for the chapters. I wanted to write a few comments for the paragraphs that I feel were awkward. But really, the whole chapter is not very readable compared to earlier chapters. Marcellus' internal monologue and his thoughts are inserted between the speech of Infinite, and it's very confusing to put it mildly.

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