Vincent1873

The ending was pretty weak. No climax to speak of. The last challenge he had was the heavenly tribulation to Mahayana.

Six sentences is not a wall of text. Don't tempt me to write a wall of text. The point was that I'll stop commenting here about it if you don't want me to. I don't see what any of my comments have to do with your story possibly getting banned. They have nothing to do with each other. The mods are perfectly capable of deleting my comments if they don't like them. On top of that like I said these "insults" were all G-rated. There was no cursing or vulgarity in any of my comments. The idea that my comments could somehow get your story banned makes zero sense. If I'm randomly discussing game mechanics or what type of pet I'd go for then that's a neutral comment. If I comment to say DF users clothes change with them or write a paragraph detailing exactly how DF weakness to water works with examples included so you don't fall into a common One Piece fanfiction pitfall then those are examples of constructive feedback. If I insult people targeting or insulting the MC then that's generally not considered negative. Even if you count those it's still only about 11 insults. I'm also using the term "insult" very loosely to include criticizing their actions rather than actual insults. You are still wildly exaggerating my comments to justify yourself. You don't really need to. Authors can ban people for whatever reason. I was just stunned for reasons already mentioned. I think I see what it actually is though. Not enough overt praise for the story to counter the mild criticisms of the MC I occasionally made. Like I said I will stop discussing this here if you don't want to. I will defend myself from untrue statements however.

It's fine. I'm over it. I was just flabbergasted that I was blocked for basically calling the MC's thought process braindead when you made him dumb on purpose. Then I just defended myself against these wildly exaggerated accusations. Saying I'm constantly insulting him when it happened less than 10 times in 200+ chapters and saying that I called him every name in the book when I at worst I used G-rated insults. Anyway, good luck on your book. I probably won't be continuing it while blocked as I find the situation rather insulting myself.

That's not really accurate though is it? Of the 30 comments MAYBE 8 of them could be considered insulting the MC. Saying I have 30 comments all insulting the MC and that I'm insulting him at every turn is simply not a true statement. Me calling him all the names in the book is also not accurate. I didn't even call him a psychotic killer. I said even such people can be nice to people they like. That was just an example to show that being nice to some people doesn't make you nice in general. I didn't actually name the MC as being such. As for me responding to other people? Was the MC's character not the subject of the post I was responding to? I didn't even start the conversation and only left a single post. Claiming I'm borderline breaking the guidelines is ridiculous. You're also conveniently ignoring the several posts defending the MC.

Geez. Did you really block me from commenting just for mildly insulting the MC, which you intentionally made flawed, with articulated criticisms? I probably would have positively reviewed the story too. Oh well.

Like I said you can’t verify any of this. If it was about yourself? Sure you may make the statement even if it’s unlikely. Someone else is completely unverifiable. Simple fact is you only know what they tell you. He may have tried to help a coworker past a candy crush stage and you wouldn’t know.

Senior brother who stole his unlucky beast I believe.

Hit him with the sin fire.

or at least a lung instead of liver.

Yes and I’m sure fish is the only food he’s eaten too. There arr loads of free to play games. The first ones being those owned by your friends and family members. Maybe if your friend is super old or grew up super poor and nobody had electricity but as it is even you can’t really verify this information yourself with any sort of reliability. He could be playing a different game while you’re reading this and you won’t know if he’s not next to you.