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VirtuousSinner

VirtuousSinner

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  • VirtuousSinner
    VirtuousSinner16d
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    Hi everyone, this is the mandatory & selfish 5-star review from the author. 😉 I am proud of myself that I have published 20 chapters in this book. Breaking my record for all my previous books. đŸ’Ș And I hope to continue publishing even more chapters as this book is a very ambitious project. The story is an action-adventure story. It will be somewhat slow-paced as I try to build the world and characters. At least I will try my best to do so. This is a harem story. And the world is very dark so I expect a mature mindset when reading it. I am an amateur author. And I write mostly in my free time after work. That's why I request you to help me improve with your constructive criticisms in the comments, reviews, etc. Consider giving me Power Stones once in a while if you feel like it. With such small gestures I can know that my readers like the story I write. It will motivate me to continue writing for you. Thank you.

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  • VirtuousSinner
    VirtuousSinner16d
    Commented

    That's a flag!

    A Casual Day
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    Erotic Adventures in the Omniverse: Vampire Lord got too many wives
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  • VirtuousSinner
    VirtuousSinner17d
    Replied to Abeorohm

    I want to write, but right now I am devoting my time to an original novel. If you like my writing, please consider reading my new novel. Thank you.

    Ch 10 New Novel
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    Reincarnation in One Piece (Hiatus)
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  • VirtuousSinner
    VirtuousSinner17d
    Commented

    the phrase 'seductive smile' looks good with females, when you use it with a male, it sounds creepy

    "What?" she exclaimed, her voice filled with bewilderment as she tried to process the implications of Xiao Chen's wink and seductive smile directed towards her.
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    Heaven defying villain:despair broke chosen ones
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  • VirtuousSinner
    VirtuousSinner17d
    Commented

    can't he purchase the item from his shop?

    But it seems he had to be ruthless, and if he didn't have a yang-type physique, he would devour it; if he didn't have a background, he would snatch it.
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  • VirtuousSinner
    VirtuousSinner17d
    Commented

    That cannot be called the fourth condition. Most of the cultivation novels, the protagonist was shown as someone very handsome. At least that's common in the recent ones.

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  • VirtuousSinner
    VirtuousSinner26d
    Replied to Daoist7EZpg5

    He is not granting them the system, but its limited capabilities. As for why others, because he wants to increase his power (followers). He is too carefree to go look for so many followers himself, so he outsourced that to someone whom he could trust. Only they could add someone, no one else.

    He granted them access to the Training Room and other abilities while also allowing them to keep 100% of the points earned. Furthermore, they could add anyone they wanted and choose how many points to share.
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  • VirtuousSinner
    VirtuousSinner26d
    Replied to Daoist7EZpg5

    There are many reasons for that. First, as you may have noticed, it's his carefree mentality. Second, he is the one and only owner of the world's strongest artifact capable of making him the world's strongest in a short time as long as he wants. But he doesn't want that as he wants to enjoy his life and by extension, the game. You can think it like, even if the reality will fuse with the game, he is the person least bothered by it. That's why he treats the game as a game.

    Lastly for the Player Rankings, if he got a rankings, good, if not, still good. He wanted to play the game only to enjoy and have fun.
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  • VirtuousSinner
    VirtuousSinner26d
    Replied to Daoist7EZpg5

    i don't want to spoil anything for now

    [After 15 days, a monster tide will attack all the territories designated as players' starting territories along with the territories established by players and their followers. The event will be two days long. The strength of the monster tide will depend on the overall strength of the territory. After which the top 100 players with the most monster kills will be awarded. Kills done by followers will be counted in players' accounts. Top rewards consist of potions and potion formulas.]
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  • VirtuousSinner
    VirtuousSinner26d
    Replied to Daoist7EZpg5

    I can understand, it may be confusing. I am considering adding an auxiliary chapter in a few days with all these details. For now, you can understand it like this, sequences are the cultivation stages to cultivate the path. There are 10 sequences ranging from 9 to 0. 9 being the lowest and 0 being the highest. Each sequence has 10 ranks from 1 to 10. 1 is the lowest and 10 is the highest. For every sequence, ranks 1 to 3 are called early-stage, ranks 4 to 6 are called mid-stage, ranks 7 to 9 are called late-stage, and rank 10 is called peak-stage. Each sequence had separate titles irrespective of the path followed. For the sequence 9, it's Extraordinary. Titles for later sequences will be revealed later. Hence, early-stage Extraordinary means sequence 9, ranks 1 to 3. I know it's very confusing, but I will publish the auxiliary chapter with the details so that everyone can understand the mechanics better.

    At level 0, the monsters in the training room can reach up to the early stage of Extraordinary, i.e., up to rank 3.
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  • VirtuousSinner
    VirtuousSinner27d
    Replied to Daoist7EZpg5

    Thanks for reading

    Ch 10 Tasting the Twins
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  • VirtuousSinner
    VirtuousSinner27d
    Replied to Daoist7EZpg5

    Thanks for reading. More details will be added later.

    Ch 2 Eldritch Nexus System
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  • VirtuousSinner
    VirtuousSinner27d
    Replied to Daoist7EZpg5

    I didn't get your question. Also thank you for the previous chapter. I corrected it.

    "Sister, we completed the Lord's mission", said Ayame. She had the same fanaticism in her eyes as Yumi, just much less than her.
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  • VirtuousSinner
    VirtuousSinner27d
    Replied to Daoist7EZpg5

    thanks, corrected

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  • VirtuousSinner
    VirtuousSinner27d
    Replied to Daoist7EZpg5

    thanks, corrected

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  • VirtuousSinner
    VirtuousSinner27d
    Replied to Daoist7EZpg5

    In the next chapters, some basic features are included, proper details will be given later

    That didn't mean that he had no interest in them. He didn't mind having followers as sexy as them. But the question was why. Why did they want to serve him? He didn't believe that he was suave and charismatic enough to make girls follow him with a look.
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  • VirtuousSinner
    VirtuousSinner27d
    Replied to Daoist7EZpg5

    yes

    If Yumi had a status panel like players, she would find that her SAN was barely above 0 at 0.00000
.001.
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  • VirtuousSinner
    VirtuousSinner27d
    Replied to Daoist7EZpg5

    In the next chapters, some basic features are included, proper details will be given later

    She and her sister were identical twins but she had no problems distinguishing them. So she easily found who was who among the two twins in front of her.
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  • VirtuousSinner
    VirtuousSinner27d
    Replied to Daoist7EZpg5

    only of girls, and maybe futanari too if the readers choose them to be included in the future

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  • VirtuousSinner
    VirtuousSinner1mth
    Replied to Harbinson

    Thanks for reading.

    Ch 11 Family Talk
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