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Hi everyone, this is the mandatory & selfish 5-star review from the author. đ I am proud of myself that I have published 20 chapters in this book. Breaking my record for all my previous books. đȘ And I hope to continue publishing even more chapters as this book is a very ambitious project. The story is an action-adventure story. It will be somewhat slow-paced as I try to build the world and characters. At least I will try my best to do so. This is a harem story. And the world is very dark so I expect a mature mindset when reading it. I am an amateur author. And I write mostly in my free time after work. That's why I request you to help me improve with your constructive criticisms in the comments, reviews, etc. Consider giving me Power Stones once in a while if you feel like it. With such small gestures I can know that my readers like the story I write. It will motivate me to continue writing for you. Thank you.
That's a flag!
the phrase 'seductive smile' looks good with females, when you use it with a male, it sounds creepy
can't he purchase the item from his shop?
That cannot be called the fourth condition. Most of the cultivation novels, the protagonist was shown as someone very handsome. At least that's common in the recent ones.
He is not granting them the system, but its limited capabilities. As for why others, because he wants to increase his power (followers). He is too carefree to go look for so many followers himself, so he outsourced that to someone whom he could trust. Only they could add someone, no one else.
There are many reasons for that. First, as you may have noticed, it's his carefree mentality. Second, he is the one and only owner of the world's strongest artifact capable of making him the world's strongest in a short time as long as he wants. But he doesn't want that as he wants to enjoy his life and by extension, the game. You can think it like, even if the reality will fuse with the game, he is the person least bothered by it. That's why he treats the game as a game.
i don't want to spoil anything for now
I can understand, it may be confusing. I am considering adding an auxiliary chapter in a few days with all these details. For now, you can understand it like this, sequences are the cultivation stages to cultivate the path. There are 10 sequences ranging from 9 to 0. 9 being the lowest and 0 being the highest. Each sequence has 10 ranks from 1 to 10. 1 is the lowest and 10 is the highest. For every sequence, ranks 1 to 3 are called early-stage, ranks 4 to 6 are called mid-stage, ranks 7 to 9 are called late-stage, and rank 10 is called peak-stage. Each sequence had separate titles irrespective of the path followed. For the sequence 9, it's Extraordinary. Titles for later sequences will be revealed later. Hence, early-stage Extraordinary means sequence 9, ranks 1 to 3. I know it's very confusing, but I will publish the auxiliary chapter with the details so that everyone can understand the mechanics better.
I didn't get your question. Also thank you for the previous chapter. I corrected it.
thanks, corrected
thanks, corrected
In the next chapters, some basic features are included, proper details will be given later
yes
In the next chapters, some basic features are included, proper details will be given later
only of girls, and maybe futanari too if the readers choose them to be included in the future