Xiaoyunyun

Rewritten my @ss everything the same and stinks same and have same problems. The only thing that changed is the yapping increased maybe the dude used ai or something. Lol

I skipped the chapter

What a trash chapter especially that pov. what the fuk is even that at the end?

This chapter feels like it was created just for some shock value. Gets invited to royal guard without doing anything and also makes exception for him. Lol

Blade capable of cutting through any obstacle. From Kurenai's genjutsu 👀 😂😂😂 lol "In a world where bloodlines and powerful ninjutsu reign supreme, Mei Zhen proves that true strength lies in a single sword capable of severing all laws." This doesn't prove shit. Just because mc could do it. Doesn't mean others can do it. Especially if he is achieving it with the help of his system. A bloodline will remain reign supreme even after mc becomes the strongest and after. Because that's just the how naruto world operates. The only thing mc will be proving is that there are other possibility and paths to being the strongest.

One other thing is how this story can't go any second without mentioning sunny. Like it can't stand on its own feet and everything feels rushed. He wakes up sunny. Sunny doesn't like him. Goes to the academy look his dorm right besides sunny. Tests his abilities mentions sunny again. Goes to eat no seat available except you guess it, sunny. Sunny argues with other stranger, he's there you know sunny is kinda big deal and important so, he gotta make friend. What do you mean he is gay. He isn't gay this is all coincidence. ( In my humble opinion, I think he just wants suk off sunny). I also like how he complains about sunny monologue thing but he does the same thing but at least sunny has something to show for it and doesn't makes mistakes and blame it on his flaws. Lol The story also tries to portray sunny as the hot headed guy picking fights with mc and him being this cool guy which was a masterstroke of a genius move. Which you don't realise until you read this chapter. Lastly, even the character dialogue are the same from story like nephis and han talk. Which isn't that big of a deal but it does slowly adds up. Reading up to this point it feels like lot of things happen but it didn't honestly. Maybe talk with other non main characters. Mc spending two minutes without mentioning sunny and add things outside of og story. Its like this story only following the linear path of og story. From walking up, to academy and cafeteria. Every character he meet up until this point and talk. Everything it did is follow story to the T. Maybe except for explaining his abilities and his nightmares chapter which wasn't nightmare at all. The story doesn't have much of a substance and very little to add to the original story. The story doesn't have it very own pace and only interested on the main character and the plot. Not the world itself and people living in it. I don't how to explain it properly. The story feels very shallow. That's it my rambling ends here not criticism.🫰okay

Mc blabber everything to staff and then blames on his flaws. The apathy makes you logical not a ret@rd. Dude doesn't even wait and think for a sec, how much he should reveal. Which did caught me off guard and felt rushed. Anyway, what a dumb@ss mc. Lol Apathy = Zero survival instincts Of course this apathy flaw only start appearing from this point on. Not because someone criticised the lack of personality of mc and he felt hurt so, he needed to do something about it. He even put up note about it at the end. 😂 Must be feeling very proud with his counter points tweaking his fake villain mustache. "Oh I'm sorry, I didn't gave overpowered abilities to mc" Says the guy who already gave the Mc everything without doing anything. That whole chapter stink shit. At the end of the day guy can't take any criticism at all.

This chapter sure is trash. The concept was good but rest is straight up garbage.

"His personality will come into view when fighting his flaws" lol

This is Chinese what do you expect? Five star level service and quality control?