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still dont understand why he has to accumulate 300 points to level up when hes only in the first stage lol

Presumptuous! I believe is the correct spelling?

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Author, Are these the correct cultivation stages? I hope you explain more in depth about the stages.

did you mean to type "scared" instead of sacred?

"silence!" God im cringing hard lmaoo

I visibly cringed reading the r18 scene. Why do most r18 authors in this app write like they're in a American high school.

wait wait wait, so that xia le is the woman on his bed? and the real su ziqiu is dead?

very intense first chapter.

great r18 novel overall, I hope you have your plans/plots laid out for this novel so you can push chapters out consistently. I do enjoy this work alot. Anyways stay strong 💪 You're the only one I know right now that has a cultivation novel with actual r18 scenes and not ambiguous stuff! Happy new years author!