
Avid reader, particular interests in Urban, rebirth/cultivation, critical returns and such novels along the theme of “am I a cultivation big shot”
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Except that one died which seems to be overlooked.
I feel this paragraph could have been handled better than just ..sucked into a screen. Feels disappointingly rather anticlimactic.
Gender issues need fixing
This novel isn’t to bad with the 30 chapters released. I actually felt quite immersed in the story and was disappointed that I had read all the available chapters. It is the standard weak to strong trope, a system based on choices offered to gain rewards or punishments and the usual academy setting. I am liking the MCs actions as he isn’t (so far) antagonistic, seems pretty emphatic (as evidenced by his decision to heal the brother of Kira, rather than receiving a hugely expensive item) and of course rather self interested which he doesn’t hide. It has a decent world setting, makes no excuses about where the strong makes the rules and that the characters have depths which make them engaging. TL;dr - I’m liking this enough to keep following.
Pass, if he wants to be a masochist then do it elsewhere.
Is this a repeat from above?
Agree with this comment, murder is really and I mean really a lot to take in for an infant. I would hope that she was adopted out somewhere as murder really is something hard to accept for the little girl infant.
Maybe stop trying to be an a$$hole researcher and smell the roses a bit. A little explanation of why it is being done would yield better results. Really do not like the analytical MC so much, just seems emotionally stunted.
Rather stalkerish creepy level.