Ironlotuce

wasnt the staff in kays hands? He got attacked when he was reading from the staff right?

thank you for the chapter.

I believe it only goes one way, the judge cannot declare someone guilty (i.e. overturn a jury non-guilty verdict), but they can overturn a juries guilty verdict.

question, what happened to the armor he got from that village/town? is he just not wearing it or does he not have it anymore?

knack not nag

Im sorry, why was he nerfed so much? Wasn't it previously mentioned he took on two people at once and won basically without effort? Also what happened to the whole potion arc? He was going somewhere with it, and now it feels like its being put on the back burner.

Note: Here despite implies something has changed, so maybe "despite the improvement in the goon's pokemon, John made quick work of him again" or alternatively "The goon's pokemon had made no improvement so John made quick work of him again"

I like the idea of the book, but there are some issues, namely the continuity, and character development. For continuity, there was an instance where Danzo essentially assaulted MC, yet not only did he recover suspiciously quickly emotionally (which ok, might be attributed to the fact that they are a green tea person), but the marks Danzo left also mysteriously disappeared (it would have been cool to get a whole kakashi reaction, or just an explanation of how he healed so fast). For character development, although in the intro to the character, we are told they are smart, we don't see much of it in their day to day interactions, it would have been nice to get an MC pov to feel how smart they are. Other than that, love the plot (maybe tone down the obsessive/possessiveness so you don't get stuck later on plot wise) and i like how the author explores other characters, making the world feel more alive. also the timing of when he meets them all is well planned, it feels natural and the story continues to be interesting. can't wait for more chapters.

I love this books concept. First off the fear accumulation being used in a lottery system is really cool. Secondly, I kinda like how dense and OP the MC is since it makes for funny scenes filled with irony. I am very looking forward to how his transition to Hogwarts is going to happen.

Thank you for the chapter!