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Princess Jiang Fei, who was sent to the marriage alliance in her previous life and died tragically, was reborn on the road to the marriage alliance.
In her previous life, she was silent and gave in step by step. After her rebirth, she was cunning and changeable.
She would fight to the death with whoever forced her to marry.
He was singing praises and coaxing her to go through a marriage alliance.
Threatening and enticing her to go through a marriage alliance, I'm sorry, do you believe that this princess can let you rest in peace right now?
If she threatened her with her family, she could send her to hell in minutes and make her regret provoking her.
The treacherous official was dead…
The Empress was dead…
The Crown Prince was dead…
……
She shook her head vigorously." I didn't do it, really!"
She pointed at a certain someone." You can ask him if you don't believe me."
"Wifey, honesty is a virtue," someone said with a smile.
"Don't think that I don't know what you've done!" She grabbed him and said sinisterly.
……
Xiao Shuye had once thought about whether the world was more important or that little liar was more important. Later, he said,"Fortunately, it's you. You're lucky."
Stars and moon in the clouds
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Au début tout aller bien, sauf qu'au fur et à mesure... l'IA à malheuresement pris trop de place. Je ne parle pas de l'utiliser pour la relecture et la correction, mais pour tout le reste. On le ressent dans les phrase de cloture de chapitre - cet effet mecanique et creux. On le ressent dans les dialogues froid et impersonnel - chaque personnage devrait avoir ça façon de parler en fonction de sa personnalité et son age. De plus, les pensées du personne devienne de plus en plus étrange. Comment peut-il savoir des choses qui n'ont jamais été expliquer ? Comment s'est-il qu'il y a un passif entre la famille Voss et la sienne ? d'ou ça sort ? comment s'est-il que tout ceux réunis dans cette classe sont des Seigneur ?