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This is the most underrated isekai ever. A mix of “martial peak” and “tales of demons and gods” with unbelievable originality, so unique. This will change isekai forever. Can’t wait to see the future of this novel

The unbelievable turn of events is catchy yet too unrealistic. However, I am still hook. Try to change a bit on the writing style but not totally. You have the skills so keep up the good work!

This story is unbelievable but so funny. If you read it expecting it to follow reality then change your mind set. Read it for fun and enjoy where it takes you. The characters mix well and the have fun and misha** along the way :) It is a good read :)

UNBELIEVABLE [Verse 1: Daniel Seavey] Hey, how do we, how do we How did we end up at your place? With my hands, with my hands With my hands around your waist Like you're too cool, cool I don't believe that it's true, still [Verse 2: Corbyn Besson] Your taste I could drink, I could drink I could drink a whole damn case Every drip, every drip Couldn't let you go to waste When you're making those moves, eh I don't know what to do, yeah [Pre-Chorus: Jack Avery] If it's all a dream, don't wake up 'Cause I got your body right here next to me, just wait up Gotta check myself 'cause I just can't believe, ayy-oh That you were in my heart, you were in my head Now you're waking up here in my bed [Chorus: Daniel Seavey & Corbyn Besson] Unbelievable, yeah Unbelievable, yeah Unbelievable, yeah Unbelievable, you are Unbelievable, it's Unbelievable That you were in my heart, you were in my head Now you're waking up here in my bed Unbelievable, yeah Unbelievable, yeah Unbelievable, yeah Unbelievable Unbelievable, it's (Unbelievable now) Unbelievable That you were in my heart, you were in my head Now you're waking up here in my bed [Verse 3: Jonah Marais & Corbyn Besson] Hey, never thought, never thought I'd be holding your hand Picking up, picking up, picking up my confidence When you're making those moves, eh (Those moves) I don't know what to do, yeah (To do) [Pre-Chorus: Jack Avery, with Daniel Seavey] If it's all a dream, don't wake up 'Cause I got your body right here next to me, just wait up Gotta check myself 'cause I just can't believe, ayy-oh That you were in my heart, you were in my head Now you're waking up here in my bed [Chorus: Daniel Seavey & Corbyn Besson] Unbelievable, yeah Unbelievable, yeah Unbelievable, yeah Unbelievable, you are (Unbelievable) Unbelievable, it's Unbelievable (Unbelievable) That you were in my heart, you were in my head Now you're waking up here in my bed Unbelievable, yeah Unbelievable, yeah (Oh yeah) Unbelievable, yeah Unbelievable Unbelievable, it's (Unbelievable) Unbelievable That you were in my heart, you were in my head Now you're waking up here in my bed [Interlude] Unbelievable, yeah Unbelievable Unbelievable, yeah [Pre-Bridge: Zach Herron & Corbyn Besson] Gotta check myself 'cause I just can't believe (Can't believe) That you were in my heart, you were in my head Now you're waking up here in my bed [Bridge: Zach Herron] Unbelievable, yeah Unbelievable, yeah Unbelievable, yeah Unbelievable Unbelievable, it's Unbelievable That you were in my heart, you were in my head Now you're waking up here in my bed [Chorus: All, Daniel Seavey, Zach Herron] Unbelievable, yeah Unbelievable, yeah (Oh) Unbelievable, yeah Unbelievable (Oh, no-no-no) Unbelievable, it's Unbelievable (Yeah) That you were in my heart, you were in my head Now you're waking up here in my bed -Luke Seavey 🍉