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It's a good story but the pace is TOO FAST!? Like, "Wait what? What happened again?" There's no time for readers to digest what's happening and the characters lack reaction (e.g. When the co-worker saw his new car or when the boss got pointed a gun and blackmailed) Also, you have a lot of mistakes with a & an, now & know as well as to & too... It would be great if you could separate the conversation into different paragraphs: I said, "...." My boss, "..." exclaimed. Something like that... I hope this helps your group... -from Originals Author Society

It's a good novel. But you change the plot a little. The MC always being blackmailed by others is getting pretty boring. He isn't trying to fight back against being manipulated and blackmailed by others. So some readers might get the wrong idea that he is stupid and pathetic. Or that he enjoys being blackmailed.

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Pretty decent a lot of reviews are complaining on how he shouldn’t be blackmailed or he’s a wuss. But the best way to explain it would be how he is kind of insane, who isn’t after being tortured and then becoming friends with his captor. He’s just so lazy he doesn’t care if he’s blackmailed cuz she’s rich and fun to be around

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