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the tension is high the pace isn't too draggy and the action is manageable it's nice overall

it's nice very funny humor is big even though there isn't not much action it's nice[img=exp]

shameless author here writing a review on your own book anyways i won't be publishing for a while

shameless author here writing a review on your own book anyways i won't be publishing for a while

i am sure he will keep up

just hope you can fix it

i swear he is right now it's five years ago since last updated c'mon upload already[img=update]

this is one of my favorite novels i will be a lot happy if you do another novel like this one....... one reason is because,i can't read chapter 49 to 52 and probably the remaining chapters

love this,but the thing you wrote about what kakashi said isn't in chapter 46 it is in chapter 47 just a little mistake people all make mistakes actually love this

c'mon post another chapter i haven't still lost hope on ya