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The title hits too close to home for him so he is crying on every book he finds in this genre
Considering the fact that the author dropped this story, wish at least he uploaded the rest of the chapters or maybe even the old version before the rewrite. Don't think it's worth it to subscribe for an incomplete story.
A huge letdown. It is very tame for a NTRS story. Both the mother and wife only do it with 3-4 people throughout the story and that's it. What a waste.
The concept and story are really good with high update frequency. But it would better if the author focused a little more on grammar and other errors instead of rushing. It happened to another ntrs novel that just focused on releasing chapters frequently but was a pain to read due to all the mistakes.
What about the isekai one?
Did you delete the previous version? Is there going to be any differences?
Man, instead of rewriting this too can't you just focus on the original? Not everything needs to be pandered to the whiners who cry at the mention of NTR. Not going to read this, rated so to not cause the author any problems.
Dude, how many times are you going to rewrite these stories? There is a limit to how much you milk your readers man. It would be something if you at least complete one of these but whether it was Infinite Ladder, Naruto or DxD, you haven't finished a single one properly. Also it's a bummer that there is no way to read the originals since it's wiped out from this site. I was actually looking forward to your stories when you started man, now it just feels soulless. It's just disappointing. Hope you find your stride man. P.S.- The first draft of Naruto and DxD were much better than whatever you are writing now.
Can you add a little bit of mom in next chapter? Wish there was more of her.