Rowen_Kun

So far I've really enjoyed the story, I'm just sad that he hardly ever uses Heatblast, and he's one of my favorite aliens. Aside from that, the story is sensational, one of the best in Ben 10.

The story so far is very good, I found it interesting that he needs to release the aliens little by little, it reminded me of some Ben 10 games you find on Roblox (in a good way of course). I'm eagerly waiting for more.

The chapter as a whole was very good, I didn't feel any drop in quality compared to the previous ones, I'm looking forward to the next one.

Спасибо за отзыв и указание на ошибки. Я думала внести небольшое изменение, чтобы обеспечить более тесное взаимодействие с сестрами.

Fixed

I was inspired by two, one of them is Re:Zero and the other is Hell Difficulty Tutorial.

I usually indicate who is speaking, and the rest of the story continues from that point of view until I mention again that I have switched.

You mean between both the male and female versions? I'm trying to make it as clear as possible by always mentioning when there's a change. In this case, the story is told entirely from the protagonist's point of view.

It's a good class, very good in fact, but I've given advantages and disadvantages to all classes, at least in the early levels, they're all relatively equal.

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