Alexei_4521

You know when I read a review and I see that the mc is going to be very powerful from the beginning, what I hope is that it continues to be like that because what I hate the most is being told, look, my mc is the best so that later, since they don't know how to write, they want to repeat it. what happens in the canon so the mc, despite being very powerful, can't do anything

I thought he was reincarnated with Kars' body.

.........................................................................time the story gets really bad instead of better.....................................

I'm pretty sure the world government didn't know that kuma was part of the revolutionary army and in this chapter you have a traitor telling a cp 0

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You know I looked at the rating and I thought it was a good fanfic but the truth is that this fanfic has one of the worst mc I've ever read.........................

your mc is too human and if this story wasn't a super hero fanfic it would be a simply great mc but it's a super hero fanfic and in this fanfic your mc's personality is shit you'll see the story I like the templates that Many fight, I don't care, but in this story I could replace your mc with another from completely different stories and they would still be better mcs in your story and that says a lot of bad things about your mc.

your mc is so contradictory that he looks like a teenager even though he is already an adult also we were given to understand that it would be the story of an antihero but we end up with a hero who says and thinks phrases so cringe

the mc looks like those emos who were for mida but more radical in his life there was not a tragedy of such magnitude as to have the personality he has, it was simply like that and the author no matter how many you ask him, you never answer why his is like that personality