BookWorm69

I'm having a hard time continuing this novel as it no longer makes sense, she has 3000 fragments which is way beyond her supposed saturation point which is supposed to be 1000 until she leaves, that was the whole point why being stuck in the forgotten shore was so bad for them, because they can't grow stronger once they reach that saturation point which is the same for everyone. so she shouldn't be able to grow stronger and she shouodnt have even gotten past a 1000 to begin with. I hate the fact that he's now nothing more than a dog and the author made it that way...

it becomes worse...

fate is just an excuse for authors to repeatedly create unlikely or impossible scenarios. later it is revealed just hoe big this place is, so much so that it is basically impossible to meet anyone unless it's close to ot at the place they are all heading.

please don't spoil. I didn't know her name

yeah but it probably has tunnels since the coral isn't just a maze like we humans build, ours is just walls but these are coral reefs with holes connecting some and alot of dead ends

yea but any person with a hint of intelligence would be able to realise that it wouldn't come until it turns dark by connecting the fact that it only started dissapearing exactly when the sun rose. for a guy that is supposed to be smart like that time he thought of using gravity to defeat an unbeatable monster he cannot figure out the oceans relation to the sun. some authors make these mistakes with characters where they seem intelligence when the plot needs it but are dumb otherwise, it also contradicts his character so far.

no way he can see that far. even a hundred meters is a stretch to say the least, but hundreds as in many hundred is impossible for him unless he can see in pitch black night and has a vision that is lik e a telescope or a special ability. but so far his whole body is that of a human, his vision is no different from any regular human at the moment.

then his growth shouldnt be stagnant, he now has enough nutrients that his halted growth should skyrocket henceforth. please don't make the mc into a midget.

it would be a dumb risk for the author, because the moment he gets a master is the moment most of the readers quit, even if the relationship gets abolished later, nobody would want to bother reading further with a real slave mc who can't even resist, its different to read a novel where mc is a slave but he can choose to lie and disobey but if he can't then it's boring and annoying as fuck to read.

I'm guessing that someone will speak his true name but it won't do anything because it needs to be said in the runic language to work.