Akito_

I love the how the start has been going and I’m excited for more chapters to come the world building and the set up for possible future development is great I’m especially looking forward to what comes after how chapter 13 ended

This is Great the only critique is to spend more time describing and explaining things. you don't have to add any extra content just spend more time on the details of situations and people when describing them and their action

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Don’t care if QQ is hard to deal with you don’t just copy someone work and post it some ware without permission or even a link to original

ni

The beginning is great but the middle chunk when after he makes his body and goes after the ice elemental’s is horrendous to get through if a slog fest from there in with just enough intrigue that been built up for you try and push through but from chapter 17 it’s been a slog to get through it’s still interesting but I’m at chapter 30 and it feels like read like 5 time as much as the first 18 chapters with less than half the satisfaction of the beginning 18.

Wildcard

the story is great so far can't wait to see how it progresses in the future

The first three chapters have me excited about what is to come, I can't wait for more releases.