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Love the relation of power between the MC and his source of abilities. He is not a fool and I love his way of life. Wish it's power wasn't so strong this early but he will probably need it.

the authors writing improved massively since I've last read one of their works (the horrorverse one) and iIhave to say, you keep on delivering gold to us

This is the best Rosario + Bampire story I have ever read and the fact that it combines with DxD so well and without letting DxD take over is amazing. I have trouble coming up with any flaws/problems about the book. The characters are all distinct people with their own values and they are all developing into unique people as they grow from living through the supernatural world/school they now live in. The world building is great and growing at a steady, consistent pace. The power scale is well balanced where someone can punch up if they are prepared and their build is made to specifically take advantage of their enemies weaknesses. On the other hand fighters of equivalent power also find themselves in slug matches that they really don’t want to be in and only the most stubborn/willful win. It follows Rosario + Vampire storyline but also let the Mc butterflies and the inclusion of being within DxD to slowly but steadily change cannon as the story goes on. Really I could keep going but you should instead take that time to read the first few chapters and enjoy a new favorite book instead!

The story is really good, and it's well written; the system is also well designed. However, the plot feels extremely forced whenever Padmé is involved. You can particularly sense the author's influence over the characters, like a puppet master. Whenever Padmé is around, it's as if we're reading about the original Anakin instead of a reincarnated person. All the discussions and situations they find themselves in feel contrived, making it obvious that the author is trying to set up a future romance between Padmé and Anakin. I really like the Padmé and Anakin dynamic in the original story, but when it involves a reincarnated character who knows how hypocritical and often clueless she is in her decision-making, it becomes frustrating. Anyone who has read even a little about her would recognize that she presents numerous red flags for any romance or relationship; she is trouble. For instance, she might wake up in the middle of the night to infiltrate enemy lines and confront a mafia boss, insisting that slavery is wrong and that the Republic consists of good people. This encounter inevitably leads to a gunfight, where she ends up shooting at them. Then, just a day later, she will preach about how violence is bad. Original Anakin and Padmé are iconic, while the idea of a reincarnated character with Padmé is just unappealing. In this story, it feels forced when Anakin behaves differently around Padmé; it's as if there's a sudden switch in his personality.

The story is very good and it is well written. Just increase the update speed to atleast 7 chapters per week if possible

Me gusta mucho; es auténtico y te engancha para seguir leyendo. La trama me parece que está bien elaborada. Espero que sigas escribiendo este fanfic y, con muchas ansias.

Mandatory Author 5 star review. I am new to the writing Fan-fiction scene but I have always been an avid reader, so please tell me what you think of my writing. I will use the rest of this review as a way to explain somethings about this book. I have always felt that although Bleach has always had amazing sword users the true expectation of a "Swordsman" was never there outside some specific characters like Kenny or Unohana. Most of the times it feels like a true "magic sword do magic thing" which I love btw. So my objective is to stick to the more sword focused combat, like the first fight between Ikkaku and Ichigo where you could see the fundamentals of actual combat with rhythm and strategy being used by both sides. I hope you enjoy my fanfic and please leave me your thoughts either through comments or reviews!!

First of all, congratulations to the author of this very well-written fanfic, and I look forward to more. I hope the author continues writing. 👍

I didn't plan on writing a review, however, looking at the current ratings I changed my mind. I'm not very good at explaining shii, but I can guarantee its a good read. It's not perfect, it has minor flaws here and there, but it's pretty solid. The simulations themselves aren't rushed, I liked that it creates actual immersion. Idkwtf I'm sayin at this point- JUS FCN READ IT. G'day Mates..........................................

actually really good ofcourse it has its flaws but its wayy better than most other slop out there. the ending somehow reminded me very strongly of this other novel 'profane Prince of domination' just like this novel, it was pure wish fulfillment peak through and through though there wqs smut in it too. all in all i had a really good experience.

One of the most promising entertainment-industry fanfics I've read recently. Even with only 18 chapters, the story has already hooked me with its unique premise and engaging execution. The protagonist isn't just relying on his background as Chiranjeevi's son; he's actively working to build his own path toward becoming a global superstar. The writing is easy to follow, the pacing is solid, and the showbiz elements are genuinely entertaining. The character interactions feel natural, and each chapter leaves you wanting more. What I enjoy most is seeing the protagonist balance opportunities, challenges, and personal ambition without everything feeling too easy. Of course, it's still early in the story, but the foundation is strong and the potential is huge. If the author maintains this quality and consistency, this could become one of the better entertainment-industry fanfictions on the platform. Looking forward to future chapters. Keep up the great work, author!

Loved it... Hope the author continues it n doesn't abandon midway like other Indian authors. Also, please increase the daily chapters...

First time I’m writing a review but this fic deserves it it’s absolute peak the mc is a REAL dragonlord FIRE AND BLOOD

Writing Quality: ★★★★★ Stability of Updates: ★★★☆☆ Story Development: ★★★★★ Character Design: ★★★★★ World Background: ★★★★★ This novel is really good, and I highly recommend reading it. The only downside, in my opinion, is the slow release schedule for new chapters. I'm not sure whether NoviceAuthor is the original author or just the translator, but I've noticed that they have quite a few novels in their library, and none of them seem to be completed yet. That makes me a bit hesitant to fully invest in this story, as I'm worried it might end up being abandoned before reaching its conclusion. Interestingly, the Naruto novels seem to receive daily updates, so I'm hoping this one will eventually start getting more frequent chapter releases as well.

The characters feel like actual people, has consistent updates from what i can look, the TL is so good it took me a while to notice it was a TL

OP novel .....best novel if you're into war, politics, history and how a person may change it ......I liked it while author has changed many things in history and made it as a parallel timeline it's still good. While MC has a system it just rewards him when he change destiny of a influential person from that time, it does not force him to take any action or making dumb decisions.

THANK YOU FOR EVERYTHING TL/AUTHOR YOUVE MADE THIS UNFORGETTABLE TIME OF READING FOR ME, I SHALL NEVER FORGET IT!! THIS IS PHENOMENAL

Someone previously posted this fanfic here on Webnovel, but it wasn't successful and they abandoned it. I hope this translator will translate it completely (I have no idea how many chapters it has). If they do abandon it, I hope they provide the original title.

Funny ahh fanfic 😭😭😭 the synopsis was interesting enough to draw me in & safe to say I wasn’t disappointed 👍🏻

This has gotta be one of the best books I’ve read recently with how much of a plague AI has been. This shit is peak. ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

ngl I thought he would be carried by his mind reading but he isn’t. He’s actually pretty capable. Had low expectations but it’s much better than I thought