Being reborn sucks. And to do so in the Star Wars Universe is a recipe for disaster.

And if you are reborn as a Force Sensitive during the Old Republic Era, you are royally kriffed. 

Unless you are me. 

This is my account of life in the Star Wars Universe and how I kriffed up the timeline just by existing...

Hi, my name is Alex Barter I died in a Car accident and yeah, I've stayed so long in this dark space that I started talking with myself just to pass time. I also felt that my memory is fading away, so I decided to list in my mind what I still remember, as said I died in a Car accident and landed here. I was on my way back home form a friend of mine, we both loved Si-Fi and novels, on the faith full day we watched all the star wars movies in one go it took the whole day so it was pretty late when I was on my way back… and that's basically it more I don't remember. It's not much but I at least remember something right?
So, I started to recount that information in my head to not forget that too. Don't know how much time has passed but it felt like an eternity when finally, something happened.

"Quit repeating that already I have understood that your name is Alex Barter and that you died in a car accident", Thundered an unknown voice in my head.

"Hello there who might you be? I just repeated the last things I know to not forget them too like the rest. Didn't know someone cloud hear me could you forgive me for that?" (me)

"Hmm You're quite sentient for a dead soul normally a soul would just be dead… well I forgive you and to take you out of this place I will reincarnate you and grant you five wishes… so where would you like to reincarnate?" (The thundering voice which calmed down and which I started to assume was God)

"If it's possible I would like to reincarnate to Star Wars as it's one of only things I remember. For my first wish I would like to have a System which can show me my Status, has an Inventory, can give me Missions, has a Store and a Crafting function.
My second wish is that I have a Mining Dimension which resets every month. 
My third wish I would like the Mining Dimension to have a high force concentration so I could train in it. 
My fourth wish is that I have a Library Dimension which holds a Holocron of every known force technique there is and updates when a new force technique is found. 
My fifth wish is to have a high force sensibility." (me)

"I will grant all your wishes, but I advise you to pick something different for your fifth wish" (God)

"Then I wish for unlimited Cell replication so my body doesn't die of old age and a reinforcement of my mind so that I can withstand the strain of old age." (me)

"Granted normally I would take that as two different wishes but because you thought of the strain the old age will put on your mind, which not many people do most just ask for cheat abilities and don't care what those would do on the long run to them." (God)

"Thank you for that, so when will I reincarnate do, I still have to wait or is there something else I have to do?" (me) 

"Well you still Have to choose as which race you would like to be reborn as and which perks to be reborn with. You can choose three perks for your race." (God)

Suddenly a list of perks and Races as well as a Character editor appeared before me. As a race I choose Human, because it could be quite troublesome to get acquainted to the movement forms of the new race. For the perks I choose [Child of the Force], [Natural Mechanic] and [Hard working Immune system] with those the doors to the galaxy of Star Wars where open. As for my appearance I just choose to look like in the last live. In my last live I had ordinary looks not to chubby and not to lean, brown hair and Storm blue eyes. Just for my eyes I wanted a little tweak, so I made them golden with a little twinkle in them.

"Then I guess it's goodbye for now make sure you don't come back here to soon!" (God)
"One last question If you would allow Sir?" (me)

"Sure, go ahead." (God)

"Will there be others who choose to reincarnate into Star Wars, or would I be the only one?" (me)

"You will be the only one with the simple reason with your appearance in the universe you create an alternate timeline and as long as no one especially wishes to be put in your timeline you would be alone." (God)

"Then thank you for your assistance and for the chance to live again." (me)

"Sure, no problem have a nice Second live. Goodbye!" (God)

Then everything went dark. When I could see again, I was laying in a forest you could hear a small river in the background and the chirping of birds it was idyllic till I heard.

/System loading 5%, 35%, 42%, 68%, 87% 100% System loaded welcome host to your new live/

'Hello System, is it ok if I call you Jason in remember of my friend who was always with me from kindergarten to University?' I asked in my mind.

/That would be quite alright/(Jason)

'Then give me a rundown of your functions Jason'

/As requested, I have your Status page, the Missions Tab, Inventory, Store and Crafting Tab. God also had the liberty to bind the Mining and Library Dimension to me to grant you an easier access/ 

'That's great! Show me my Status page please.' 

/Status:
Name: Alex Barder
Age: 5 (27)
Title: [Child of the Force], [Master Mechanic], [Undying]
Race: Human
Perks: [Child of the Force], [Natural Mechanic] and [Hard working Immune System]
Abilities: [Strong Mind]
Force understanding: none
Force abilities: none
Force relationship: Child/

'So, I don't have stat points and levels… That just means I must put hard work into getting stronger, but what does Force relationship mean? System?'

/It means that the force recognises you as its own child and other than the Jedi and Sith you won't have to fight against its temptations to bring you to the other side and if you would use the Dark side of the Force you would have any of the side effects, because no one wants to hurt his own child right?/

'That's understandable and I guess I turned five because that's the age when the order takes in it's padawans right?' 

/That's correct. Now you just must wait in a few days there should be a Jedi knight coming to this Planet. He should feel you through the Force and come to pick you up. /

/New Mission Available/

'Please show me the mission Jason'

/Survive in the Forest
Time to Survive: 3 days
Reward: 1000 System points and an Automatic mining drone.
Penalty: death/

'The penalty is pretty understandable, but I think the Reward is a bit high. Not that I'm going to complain about it. Oh, right Jason do I have a starter Package?'

/Indeed, you have.
Open now Y/N? /

'Yes Obviously'

/Gained: 500 Credits, 500 System points, CR90 Corvette Blueprint/

Hi, my name is Alex Barter I died in a Car accident and yeah, I’ve stayed so long in this dark space that I started talking with myself just to pass time. I also felt that my memory is fading away, so I decided to list in my mind what I still remember, as said I died in a Car accident and landed here. I was on my way back home form a friend of mine, we both loved Si-Fi and novels, on the faith full day we watched all the star wars movies in one go it took the whole day so it was pretty late when I was on my way back… and that’s basically it more I don’t remember. It’s not much but I at least remember something right?

Disclaimer: I only have the rights on my OC'S
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My name is Heinrich, and I am your 20-year-old guy who always wanted to achieve something great. But what I wanted just was not possible to achieve. You see, I was selfish and power-hungry. I always had a yearning to be someone important someone powerful, but this did not lead me to be arrogant as I knew my place in society. I never was interested in celebrities or other so-called role models. For me, the role models were historical conquerors such as Julius Caesar, Napoleon, and even Adolf Hitler. Of course, it did not mean I agreed with their opinions or ideologies. What I found fascinating is how all of them managed to reach the top of society and changed their nations to their wills.
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One day I was busy watching my favourite sci-fi movie series, the legendary Star Wars. I always wanted to be a Sith lord and cut out a part of my own in the galaxy and rule it with an iron fist, but that was a fantasy until one day…
While I was busy making a sandwich suddenly, I hear a loud noise sounding like a colossal wave incoming but much wilder and then NOTHING, Nothing AT all not a wisp.
After an unknown amount of time...
My Consciousness emerged. Anything I can see or should I say perceive was haziness, yet not dimness as in the dark but rather NOTHING!. Something that a human with eyes couldn't imagine. Nothingness, void! First things that my brain or should I say 'soul experienced was the alleviation that I didn't stop to exist and that 'me' as in personality and memories were still here. Moreover, from my innate paranoia, I started freaking out and getting stressed over scary possible potential outcomes.
Then there is a voice in my mind?
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"How lucky you are, you know?" A humanlike like voice stated.
"Who are you, Sir, and what do mean?" I said, full of nervousness awaiting my judgment.
"Normally you would have to reincarnate." A voice said again; however, this time, my nervousness increased with hearing about reincarnation. After all, wouldn't reincarnation delete your current aspect and seed you like grass in an unlimited cycle?
"Yes sir, but you said normally?" I replied, politely full of hope and nervousness.
"Indeed!" The being retorts gleefully.
"Yesss… Usually in general, lesser being such as you would have reincarnated after the spirit washed down of their old character and then changed into clean souls." The 'being' responds smugly. 
Rapidly I felt like the temperature went minus thirty degrees,  I was scared as FUCKING hell if I had a voice I would be stuttering, and my whole body would be trembling like some retarded autist.
" But that won't happen to me, will it? I said nervously
"That's why you are lucky…hahaha… just like winning a lottery but I know you don't believe that 'YOU' could win something out of all the odds so let me explain…..
"I AM YOU!"
"Me? I am not catching your meaning, sir, and can you also explain to me how I died? Sir!" I replied more confidently with confusion.
"Nothing too crazy… your typical mortal insignificant nonsense. A nuclear bomb exploded near your position, and the shock wave cleared the rest." He replied in the voice as if talking about the weather.
"......…" I remained calm.
"Well...…"
"Anyway, I AM you from another dimension, in mortal terms I and the rest of humanity ascended, we have lots of minor abilities like to create new universes as such."
Now I was interested if that was true and he was me then he may help me out, after all, I am him, and I would do something like that, I think?
"Luckily for you, You were chosen out of all other dimensions to transmigrate to your beloved universe the Star Wars!"
'Holy shit this cannot be real. It's just like those cheesy fanfics or stupid Japanese isekei stories. But if it's true, my wish fulfilment desires could be achieved! Me a powerful Sith dominating the galaxy hahaha, oh and the enormous Xeno harems hmmm please forgive ��GOD EMPEROR' for I will sin!'
Suddenly I asked an essential question as 'me', and my 'luck' doesn't 'really go hand in hand'. "But why me out of all other dimensions?"
"Don't feel so special, I just picked you out of a random possible dimension, I could have chosen another Heinrich perhaps one whose gender-bent who knows? He replied seriously with a bit of amusement.
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"Now, I will explain how the process will go. I will send you to Star Wars universe as it was 'our' wish. Before I send you off tell me what you want—powers and such. But remember I am not your 'sugar daddy' keep it reasonable nothing too crazy 'OP'. Lastly 'NOO' to bullshit isekei crap system bullshit, firstly I can't be bothered creating such a godly level artefact, nor I want your actions steered by some shit system for gay Japanese cucks."
Hmm no system it seems, well it's not like I even wanted it, what about gamer system? Better not anger him. So, what do I want? He did not specify any specific amount, so I am guessing unlimited benefits until he feels its not 'too overpowered and unreasonable' so great choices I have here I hope?
After further thought, I've have decided what could be a 'reasonable boon'.
"I want a unique bloodline which results in me looking like a pureblood Valyrian from the series of 'game of thrones' with my features but more handsome but still me. Moreover, the bloodline will have a strong affinity towards the 'Darkside' of the force. Also, can you edit my DNA somehow so that my descendants can interbreed without genetic problems and that the females and males would have an instinctual attraction towards each other?
"Hmm….. Valyrian ethnicity with a 'Darkside' affinity, huh? Seems reasonable, want to look like a pretty boy…ahh and the incest…. too, sick bastard. Very Well, …you will have a unique bloodline from other humans. You will be more like a superior force-sensitive subspecies of the humans with the changes.
Moreover, you will be 100 per cent Valyrian; your children will not be. However, if your descendants reproduce with each other, then their bloodline will purify and eventually will be able to produce pureblood Valyrians just like you. In conclusion, you will have a high affinity with the Darkside significantly less with the 'light' than usual because of the blood. Overall you will be considered a new 'sith race'.
I was pleased with the answer.
"Bloodline it is. Who are you calling sick you are 'ME' remember? Anyway, also can you make it so that you give my bloodline eidetic memory and much higher IQ or whatnot, I want to comprehend and learn everything much faster than any normal human being(learning the collective knowledge and the tech of star wars will be near the upmost importance besides learning about 'the force'.
"Done"
Hmm, what should I ask for powers….ah yes, a Holocron! "After transmigration can I receive the Telos Holocron with the latest updates from Darth Sidious just before his downfall?"
"Yes but this would be considered your last boon because if you truly study this Holocron, you would be extremely powerful especially with your new bloodline." Being replied thoughtfully with a stern expression.
After considering my option's, I found that I am quite happy with my choices. I have a new bloodline which will make me superior to near most humans and other species, in addition, I won't need to learn from some Sith master as I will have all the knowledge I need. Overall perfection if I say so myself.
"As I see that you have accepted the boons that I have provided you, its time for you to go. Moreover, I will be choosing the timeline!" The 'being' replied firmly as if there's no room for any arguments.
"WAIT! WHAT NOW?! WHY?
"Because I set the rules, you should be happy that I allowed YOU to choose your powers at all!
"Additionally, I won't send you there like some nobody, that would make NO SENSE for the universe, and you would also be repelled as a foreign intruder of the plane. So unfortunately FOR YOU, before you have the chance to rampage the universe, you will have to be reborn hahaha."
I accepted the 'beings' demands after I felt my soul hurting for my previous defiance. I only asked politely once again. "What about my Holocron?"  
"Do not worry mortal; I will make sure when you reach youngling age you will find your Holocron."
"What is a youngling age, sir? I asked politely with a forced smile as if 'wtf is the youngling age supposed to mean? 
Smugly the being says. "Your soul is also already transferring." 
I begin feeling dizzy and losing self-awareness the feeling would be just like waking up from sleep while being half-awake. Then I hear.
"Also, your parents will be quite a surprise for you. Quite a change from standard Star Wars history, so do what you will. Seya!
Subsequently, silence takes me.....

Tags: +18, Mature, Action, Maybe Harem, Fantasy, Kingdom Building, Romantic Subplot, Strong MC, Timeline Divergence, Transmigration, Reincarnation, Gore,  Brutality, Villain MC.

A selfish power-hungry guy dies and transmigrates into the STAR WARS universe. See his attempt to conquer the galaxy and becoming a Sith. Dark/Selfish Powerhungry MC fic. I also uploaded this fic on fanfiction net so there's no copying.

Planning to finish the story even if it takes 10 years.

This is a 'REWRITE' of my first ever fanfiction; please give me feedback and suggestions. In a sense, I am turning a new leaf for this story.

English is my second language to let others know why I sometimes make mistakes.

Note: I do not own Star Wars. It Belongs to The Walt Disney Company. This story is not written for commercial gain. I make no money from it.

Author- Hello everyone, I hope your all having a great day I know I am and without further ado let's hop right into it.

1:  The chronological order will not be the same as in the original clone wars.  I originally was planning to, but it is so incredibly difficult to keep it in that order while writing a good fanfiction, so by doing it in a new chronological order it will be much easier and more enjoyable.

2:  I will be introducing new arcs into the clone wars.  

3:  I will be slightly modifying ancient star wars lore.

4:  I will not be following either canon or legends when it comes to the Sequel timeline.  Instead, I will be creating my own sequels that I believe you will all enjoy much more than either of the former options.

5:  Should there be 2 or 3 companions (Including Ashoka).  If so who should they be?

6:  Don't forget to support me at PayPal.Me/YugiohGod

When a prodigy of the Jedi Order, Mandalorian by blood, and proud warrior, sacrifices himself to allow his friends to escape the clutches of Darth Vass a member of the dark council.  

Surprisingly, he survived his suicide attack but he awakens over five millennia later.

"What happened to the Sith Empire?  Huh?  Confederacy?  Clone Wars?  What year is it?"

(WARNING:  FOR THE FINAL TIME HE IS A STRONG MC, NOT AN OP MC!!!!)

(DISCLAIMER I DO NOT OWN RIGHTS TO STAR WARS)

(-)  =  Thoughts
{-}  =  System
"-"  = Speaking
[-]   = Sounds

It was an unusually warm night of the coast of Bahrain, Our MC (Main Character) was on the Focsle of the Royal Navy Ship he works on maintaining the 30mm barrel of a Hunt Class Minesweeper. It was a standard job for our MC he was known as Drex onboard the crew, he was very quite and hard-working and never complained about anything. He was 5'4 and 22 years old with deep blue eyes and dark brown hair.

He was greasing up the barrel like he usually does when he finishes his maintainance when suddenly the siren goes on board. Normally he wouldn't care as it would be for one of the thousands of drills he has done over the past 7 months he has been on this ship but this siren was no ordinary siren it was the incoming threat siren. [ SAFEGUARD, SAFEGUARD, SAFEGUARD, AIR THREAT RED! AIR THREAT RED! AIR THREAT RED! ON ANTI FLASH AND GLOVES] Drex being on the outside of the ship first reaction was to shout "FUCKKKK" as he seen a missile coming directly to him  and that was the last thing he seen as the missile imbedded into himself and into the primary weapon system of the ship he was just maintaining.

As his soul was leaving what remains of his body he looked around to what remained of the ship he had been living on for the past 7 months. It was in ruins and not a single thing left remaining, this was mainly because of the whole ship was made of fibreglass. All he could see was body parts and chunks of whats left of the ship floating around. Somehow some of the crew had survived and were clinging onto the only remained life buoy. He thought (Thank fuck some survived) but that was all too soon as another missile came and hit the wreckage and obliterated who all survived. All he could do was get angry and wanted to know who had done it!

As his soul was getting higher into the sky he noticed flashes around the world as thousands and thousands of nuclear bombs were going off everywhere. All he wondered was (Why, why has everything went to shit) then his vision goes fully black and he couldn't see anything or hear anything.

After what felt like an eternity he hears this loud ominous voice "YOU WERE THE FIRST TO DIE IN YOUR PLANETS WAR AND NEVER HAD A CHANCE TO DEFEND YOURSELF"... Drex suddenly shouted back "WHO IS THERE! SHOW YOURSELF YOU COWARD!".. The voice returned laughing "AHAHAHAH, I LIKE YOU YOUNG ONE! AHAHA!".. Drex laughed a little "AHA! You aint bad old man but what happened?, Why did i have to die and why did the world go to shit!"... The voice went silent  for a bit and said "Computer error... There was an update that was sent world-wide by a computer company and it installed everywhere automatically but the update wasnt supposed to go out as it was flawed but a disgruntled employee sent it and boom everything went to shit from there.."

Drex went silent and just shouted "A FUCKING COMPUTER UPDATE!"... The voice came back and said "Yup simple as that, I was too busy trying to stop a war between to different universes so i didn't notice till it was too late"... Drex went silent for a bit just contemplating what happened as all of his friends and family had just been obliterated of the face of the planet along with everyone he had every met...

Finally he came round and asked "What happens now then?" He wanted to know what happens now as he loved to read Isekai novels and manga, He was a secret Otaku in the world of the military as it was the only thing that kept him kinda sane with the hours he does in the heat he works in.. The voice came back and said "Well depends on if you want to reincarnate or not. It all depends on you!" Drex was happy and shouted "I WANT TO REINCARNATE!" The voice came back and said happily "I love the enthusiasm young one!, Very well then i will give you 5 wishes since you made me laugh for the first time in a long time!" chuckling the whole time he said that.

Drex was Stunned and stuttered "Re.. Really?" The voice came back instantly laughing "Yes really hahahah" Drex was still stunned and couldn't think of anything to say, time went by and the voice came back and said "Shall i make it easier for you? Young One?" trying to get his attention, This brought Drex back out of his daze and he said "Yes please and thank you" The voice came back and said "Well looking at your memory i can see growing up you were into you video games and anime but you never neglected your fitness which is great, Hmmmmm, I'll let you keep you 5 wishes and you can choose between the following 5 universes to reincarnate into" suddenly a list pops up in front of Drex on that list it says the following:

{Please select one of the following Universes to Reincarnate into}
{Walking Dead}
{Star Wars}
{Lord of the Rings}
{One Piece}
{RWBY}

Drex was stubbed at what to decide between as he loved all the options but his current favourite was the Star Wars Fan Fics he had been reading so he asked "If i get to choose between them can i choose the timeline also?" The voice came back and said "Yes of course you can young one" Drex was physically pleased, if he had a body right now there would a massive grin on his face so he asked also "Do i get a system and decide what my body would be like also?" Drex knew it was a shot in the dark but he wanted to know..

The voice went quite for a bit and Drex thought (Maybe i asked too much, what if he removes my wishes) He was starting to get stressed out.. The voice came back and stated "After checking through your memories i see what you mean now young one, Yes you will get a system and i will make it a Gamer System to make you happy as to the designing of your own body that is a standard thing for reincarnating so you can decide your own race or choose a pre-selected species and then change what you want to look like it's all up to you" Drex became ecstatic and couldn't control himself and stated "I would like to know if ill meet other reincarnates or will it be personally for me?" The voice said "I make it so everyone gets a unique experience and i don't want people who have reincarnated meeting others as it always turns into conflict, Had that happen a hundred too many times"

Drex became quite happy as he didn't want someone who has super powers trying to kill him. Drex suddenly said "I would love to reincarnate in the Star Wars Universe and as for timeline I want to awaken about 10 years before the Invasion of Naboo" The screen that was in front of him changed as soon as he said that.

{You have chosen the following Universe to Reincarnate into}
{Star Wars}

{Timeline chosen 10 years before the Invasion of Naboo}

{Please select your race}
{Custom race and aspects}
{Sith Pureblood}
{Human}
{Chagrian}
{Gand}
{Quarren}
{Zabrak}
{More +}

Drex contemplated and slowly pressed the custom race and aspects and another screen popped up.

{Choose Base Race}
{Human}
{Sith Pureblood}
{Chagrian}
{Gand}
{Quarren}
{Zabrak}
{More +}

Drex pressed Sith Pureblood as he always played as the bad guy in the KOTOR games and other star wars games.

{Sith Pureblood selected}
{Please choose aspects you want to change and racial features}

What shown up in front of him was a 7 foot tall Sith Pureblood with bright red skin and tons of horn like features sticking out everywhere. It looks more like a blade monster than a standard sith pureblood. He slowly removed all the bone like features so he can them he also made the body a dark Red that was closer to a brownish black with tints of red than a normal red. After all the bone features were removed he changed the body back to his normally height of 5'4 as he didn't want to get used to being tall and bang his on everything. He then started to put some bone like features on his elbows and made the as sharp as he could, he then put a solid layer of bone over his chest to act like a breastplate he never has to remove a bit of inbuilt protection while he is sleeping. He changes the body to be slim but muscular, he added some shin guard with the bone intrusions so he had some extra protection again. He decided to not add any bone intrusions to he head area as he didn't want to look strange when he is fully armoured up, he added a short buzzcut as it reminded him of his old bodies hair. Once he had done that he had completed the body and now he had to add traits to his race as he will be the first of its kind.  He made sure he was male at the end then selected the button to confirm he was done.

{Aspects completed please add Racial traits}
{Total points to choose with 100 CCP = Character Creation Points}
{Adaptive Muscle Memory = 5 CCP}
{Advanced Technology Manipulation = 25CCP}
{Force Masters = 15CPP}
{Dark Lords descendant = 20CCP}
{Jedi Grandmaster descendant = 20CPP}
{Total Memory = 5CCP}
{More +}

Drex was stunned at the choices it just kept going and going and he didn't know what to decide on. He was deciding on what he wanted to be when he enters the star wars universe as he wanted to use the force but he wasnt sure that he wanted to be working under someone other than himself. He also loved the idea of being a bounty hunter that travels the universe doing what he wants. He was also always upset that the droids weren't being used to the best of their advantage so he instantly chose the technology buff as it seemed so overpowered.

{Advanced Technology Manipulation = 25CCP,
create, advanced technology, capable of completing tasks and feats so epic that it appears like magic such as controlling reality, living armor, and weapons, devices, etc also shape, and manipulate technology and technological constructs, computers, robots, hardware, and other devices of technology. Allows for physical interaction with machines, or even a psychic ability that allows mental interface with computer data. Control the flow of intricate machinery, and assemble or disengage their programming at will and operate most technology at a distance. Instinctively how to hack through difficult mainframes of information and bypass intensively challenging levels of online security. The user can also hack the systems of incredibly complex devices and weapons to aid them in various situations.}

He was stunned when he selected it as it just seemed so over powered for the price of 25 CCP so he instantly chose it and that left him with 75 CCP to play with he was happy about that. Time went by as he chose what he wanted and this is what he has chosen after what felt like hours and hours of looking through it all.

{Racial Traits chosen}

{Advanced Technology Manipulation = 25CCP,
create, advanced technology, capable of completing tasks and feats so epic that it appears like magic such as controlling reality, living armor, and weapons, devices, etc also shape, and manipulate technology and technological constructs, computers, robots, hardware, and other devices of technology. Allows for physical interaction with machines, or even a psychic ability that allows mental interface with computer data. Control the flow of intricate machinery, and assemble or disengage their programming at will and operate most technology at a distance. Instinctively how to hack through difficult mainframes of information and bypass intensively challenging levels of online security. The user can also hack the systems of incredibly complex devices and weapons to aid them in various situations.}
{Total Memory = 5CCP, Remember and recall everything that you have ever experienced, encountered, or learned in your lifetime. You only need to read, hear or see something once and you'll never forget it.}
{Adaptive Muscle Memory = 5 CCP, copy any/all movements/actions after seeing it performed once, including acrobatics, martial arts, and other physical stunts. With these skills, they can become masters and incredible at what they do, by combining what several forms which they copy how a person aims, giving themselves incredible marksmanship. However, to use certain weapons, have to watch a person fire that weapon to be able to copy it.}
{Force Master = 15CPP, Master force techniques 200% faster than usual you gain 50+ to FP = Force Points}
{Dark Lords descendant = 20CCP, By having the blood of the sith of old in your veins, you gain 50% to Darkside techniques mastery speed and +15 to FOC.}
{Jedi Grandmaster descendant = 20CPP,  By having the blood of the Jedi of old in your veins, you gain 50% to Lightside techniques mastery speed +15 to FOC. }
{Fluentcy= 10CCP, Fluent in every language in the Star Wars Universe, you will never have trouble communication with anyone out there}

Drex was happy with his selection and he confirmed it with system.

{Racial Traits Confirmed}

{Name your Race}

Drex was wondering what he should name it as it was a Sith Pureblood but he changed so much of the body and traits it had, He also got rid of the height so he will be a lot shorter than most of the other sith pure-blooded but the timeline he chose their supposed to be just about extinct anyhow so he doesn't want to be recognized by anyone of the Jedi Order. He couldn't decide what to call it so he just removed some of the sith part and changed it to PureBlooded Skell due to his body being a Sith Pureblood but he changed the body to not have the usual bone intrusions but more solid plates on his body as protection and only his elbow blades he has.

{You have chosen the name for your race as}
{PureBlooded Skell}

After a few seconds no other promts shown up and Drex got worried.. The voice suddenly said "Did you forget about your wishes young one you still have 5 to choose from ahaha" Drex suddenly remembered and then asked "What limitations do i have for the wishes?" The voice came back and said "You can wish for whatever you want but you can't ask for more wishes Ahaha" Drex sighed happily and started to wonder what to wish for. He suddenly had an idea "For my first wish i want to be a master of all combat arts" The voice happily said "Granted, What be thy next wish?" He went into deep thought and wondered (what if he was all alone in the world he will awaken on, id need survival skills and way to get off the planet...)

He though and decided (he would need someone to help him survive someone strong and wont age.. A HK droid would be perfect but what about a squad of them that would make it even better) He suddenly said "For my second wish i want to be a master of survival skills and building skills, For my third wish i want a squad of fully geared HK droids all of them being a master in a different skill" The voice said "Smart Choice they could protect you when you are young and look after you and teach you all the skills you would want"

Drex smiled that his idea went well with the ominous voice and he had suddenly decided what he wanted to do with his new life when he gets reborn. He was gonna be a mercenary that has an army of strong and powerfull droids. So he decided on what he wanted to do with his last two wishes. "For my fourth wish i want a Powerfull spaceship that can hold the Squad of HK's and is fully geared enough to go into battle and come unscathed" The voice came back and said "Your wish has been granted and i added an infinite fuel source into the ship for you so you never have to refill" Drex was Super happy about that and said "Thank you, thank you very much"

Drex suddenly asked the voice "What is your name, I want to name the ship after you Sir Voice" The voice suddenly went quite and said "I am know as God to all the universes i oversee but i am a simple administrator in my universe but you can call me Dispatcher since i dispatch the lost souls to new worlds" Drex was amused by the name and said "Well Dispatcher shall be my ship's name then since i will dispatch anyone who attacks me to you sir"

He was trying to decide what he should do for his last wish as he had so far gotten master of all combat skills,  master of survival and building skills, a squad of fully geared HK droids and a Powerfull spaceship... Just what was he missing and then he was thinking of where will he be brought into this new universe so he asked "Sir, where will i be brought up in the star wars universe?" the voice contemplated and said "You will be awoken out of carbonite at the age of 8 into a undiscovered hidden Sith Temple on the moon of Dxun as it is the largest of the moons around the planet of Onderon"

Drex was happy as he remembers the Mandalorian missions in KOTOR. He loved the mandlorian armour and there way of life. Which gave him an idea what if he can make the armour which then got him thinking about how should he mantain his robots and then he thought of something better. While thinking of KOTOR he remembers the mission looking for Star Forge then he thought why don't i wish for a Star Forge inside the Sith Temple a smaller one of course but one that he can only control and no one else. 

That was it he thought a small star forge that only he can control directly attached to the Sith Temple. Drex had finally decided and stated to the voice "For my last wish i want a small star forge that can attach to the Sith Temple that only i can control" The voice suddenly said "Well since it will be small and attached to a sith temple it wont be able to build massive star ships are you sure with this wish" Drex piped up and stated "Yes please, i am gonna use it to build droids and small space ships under my command anyhow" The voice chuckled and said "Hahaha so your gonna build an empire are you?" Drex said "More like an army of powerful robots who do what they want when they want" The voice stated "Well it was nice to meet you Young One and you shall be of on your way" suddenly everything went black and he couldnt see or hear anything anymore.

{System Initialising.... 4%}
{16%}
{37%}
{67%}
{98%}
{100%}

{Welcome Drex to the Gamer System}

{STATUS}
NAME: Drex Xi Rinn
AGE: 8 
STRENGTH: 8
VITALITY: 11 
DEXTERITY: 6
INTELLIGENCE: 25
WISDOM: 25
CHARISMA: 3

TRAITS:
Advanced Technology Manipulation
Total Memory
Adaptive Muscle Memory
Force Master
Dark Lords descendant
Jedi Grandmaster descendant
Fluentcy
Master of all Combat Arts
Master of all Survial Skills
Master of Building
{END STATUS}

Still somewhere in 1973


Tony stopped developing games. He already developed enough games to last till 1980 so he just used the profits to buy stocks of other companies. 

 He was particularly aiming for Nintendo since it was another future successful company. 

Besides, he doesn't need to build the games himself by that point. With all that time, JARVIS should be able to design such a basic game. 

Another company he started acquiring is Lucasfilms, since Disney was already partnered with Stark Pictures, Tony did not prioritise getting it. 

Lucasfilms on the otherhand should be starting production of Star Wars. George Lucas was probably going in the red for that films since the company just started. It was the best time to buy it. 

They were about to get their funding from some company when Stark Pictures swooped in to acquire their company with the production funding. 

He got his father to purchase the company since he read the novels before and heard of the company producing the films. He even offered the money from the game profits just to prove he is serious. Atari was successful and with Stark Industries producing all the hardware, there was more profits than what they should originally get since the subcontracts were all gone.

Since Howard did not manage Stark Pictures that much now anyway, he decided to allow Lucas full creative control. The only demand was to check the final product before showing.

Since Tony was also present in the negotiation, Tony decided to add another demand. Tony wanted to cameo as R2D2 in the franchise. Sure with Tony's skills he could just build an actual R2D2 with matching C3PO, but he wanted to build some fame. To be added in the credits at the part which actually mattered, he needed to be someone that is in the main group. 

On the dark side, Tony wanted to use this as a diversion since people were starting to get suspicious of him.

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Some time ago 

Tony got a prompt for communications from Zola to his public computer. Tony did not usually get any contact from the AI so he decided to answer it.

ZOLA: Master Tony, I would like to report to you about your current safety. There are some Hydra agents who want to kidnap you due to your father's bragging. They are even consulting me for mind-control training just like for the winter soldier program.

Tony: Thanks for the update, if there is nothing else urgent then you should return to text communication.

ZOLA: I suggest you lay low for now. That is it Master Tony. Goodbye

Tony returned to setting up stuff.


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Other than for cover, Tony also wanted to slip into Wakanda. With his current body, he can't just go to a plane and ride to Africa as a baby. Even with fake identities he created using Hydra he was just not going to be able to sneak out to Africa.

He can't exactly tell Steve either due to him warning the guy to not mess with time so much.

Plus, Tony would create his own light saber later. He wanted to be able to have an excuse to bringing a light saber everywhere. Getting to tell people: "I was R2D2, I am supposed to be carrying a light saber everywhere" would be the most eccentric reason any normal person would accept.

With the miniaturisation tech and a miniture arc reactor almost completed, he only needed to work on restricting the laser and he would have his own working lightsaber. Though he should also work on powerful miniture speaker. If he waved the lightsaber without the sound effects, he might look stupid.


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1974

He got the small arc reactor ready.  It was still the size of the original circle chest arc reactor since he did not try to miniaturise a full sized arc reactor.

There might be effects in the quantum side of the process and create some accident. He is still delaying this until he got full understanding of the miniaturization process. 

At least he already had the ant man suit and pym particles working. Reverse engineering a working sample would be easier than researching from scratch.

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Tony started using the research data in the UGIN project to produce his own stem cells.

UGIN would be producing simulacrum later on but right now, stem cells is his option for body repair. It can't repair bodies without a scratch but that did not matter since this was only for emergencies.

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some time after

Howard finally completed design of the new element. This was the event Tony was waiting for.  He could finally tell his family and make his life less complicated. 

Tony and Steve talked to Howard,  Maria,  Jarvis,  and Peggy. Since Howard and Peggy already had an idea,  it was easier to do it straight. 

They were informed about the reincarnation and time travel. Steve let Tony explain how their timeline worked. Though Howard was the only one able to follow the explanation. 

They were also informed about Tony needing to be treated coldly by his father from here on out. 

Tony got to explaining things with his father on how he never got taken seriously or recruited by any secret organization due to him being a rebellious teen.

That only way he would be able to grow safely is if people think he was a spoiled rebellious teenager. 

Since his parents were close to this Tony than the original, it took them revealing a bit about Hydra so that they would follow the plan. 

They were told about the monitoring and how Tony was in one of the target list due to his closeness with his father. 

Though reluctant,  everyone cooperated since they were still subconsciously treating Tony as a baby that was under the crossfire. 

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At the same time,  they also publicized events such as Tony also started building his own circuit board. 

 This event would had increased the stock price of SI. It also started hinting at the older Stark treating Tony as some asset. 

Everything was going to plan.  Tony even discovered that clone chakra is now shared by other clones after getting dispersed. He can't find any reason other than his body still developing.

 He might later be able to create a shadow clone that can last indefinitely. For now though,  he can only maintain one clone with chakra replenishment, the chakra return from the clone was just that inefficient.

Still 1974

Star Wars started filming and Tony got to go to Africa.  He of course got Steve as his bodyguard otherwise no one would allow him to go to the place. 

A super soldier created by the military using billions of dollars of research. 

Captain America - The Babysitter

Next stop Wakanda.

So this guys dies, gets reincarnated to MCU  as Tony Stark

Well, he had a chat with god/random powerful guy before reincarnation so he got something.





First time writing so please be gentle. I'm ok with comments and suggestions as well as loophole/problems. Also please keep them short. 


I'll Try once a week/maybe more. But can only promise once a month



Disclaimer: I don't own the characters(mostly) they are Marvel.Disney/ Whoever Owns them. 

I was inspired by some fanfictions so you might see some similarities.

Hey guys it's been a long, long time. Merry Christmas! Unlike last year I haven't been able to do something crazy such as create a 40k word chapter, only around a 20k chapter.  Now I hope you guys aren't too disappointed with the chapter, I took a long break from writing over the year which has delayed the release of this chapter, as well as the fact it was meant to be an intermission chapter has really restricted how long it was going to be.

When I say intermission, I mean all this chapter was supposed to be, was a set up for many different story arcs later in the novel. This can be seen with over half the scenes alluding to something that will come in the future. Some faster than others.

Now I wanted to get this out of the way as well. The first scene and last scene in the chapter and any other chapter I generally do, are likely to not be in chronological order. As can be seen with the Shmi start to the chapter, followed by the council meeting.

If you were to look at a timeline of events the council meeting happens before the Shmi scene when she arrives on the planet. I have done this so it's harder to determine a proper time line, generally because this gives me a little leeway in what I can put into each chapter.

I think that having the first and last parts of the chapter, possibly being out of chronological order gives me a lot of opportunities to set things up in the future. Almost always I would say the last scene in the chapter will be set outside the timeline of events that happened in the chapter. Ranging from weeks to months into the future. 

Of course in the case of this intermission, there is a little chronological order in the timeline of scenes, but it is hard to tell because there is nothing so connected that you can tell. Outside of the first two scenes and the last scene. (Honestly hope I'm not confusing you guys too much here)

Now moving on, as I haven't been writing at all this year, outside of a few small chapters I really would love to hear what you guys think. I believe that the council scene wasn't bad, as well as the Shmi scene. Though my forte does not lye with political scenes and I find them hard to write, especially the planning that happened in the council scene.

Other than that I also think I did a not too bad job with the self-realization with Aayla, though I think I could have possibly done it better. The mental image in her head that she fights was very hard to write in my opinion. Also I'm sure a lot of you noticed who cameoed there.

Speaking of Cameos

In regards to the Commander of his forces…. I dropped about 3 hints into that part of the chapter, 2 small one and a major hint. For those that figured it out. This is going to be an amalgamation of both canon and legends that I'll be working with. I want to make the character more logical and impersonal; really give off a power went to his head kind of vibe to him, which will change how his back story and name are given to him. It will be very fun when a certain (Hint), Demi-god and Living-God meet… I'm thinking (Foreshadow) The battle of Hypori.

So as in regards to Ventress. Yes she will be in the story in the future as an apprentice no less! But who's apprentice shall she be?…. I mean I think a few people can make logical jumps to figure it out. It's pretty damn obvious when you think about their personalities and how they match up. But again this is really just a set up for her, like everything else in this chapter. Now onto the main point here. I don't know her full backstory, I'm still going through it right now. But to those avid Ventress fans, no I don't know which version of her back story I will use, legends or canon. There are good parts about both. In regards to her father figure/master I'm still deciding if I should have it that he killed her first slaver/father that she grew attached to. I think it's a good story point to explore, just don't know if I will.

Finally on to the mysterious planet and the queen. As I have said already in the other notes, all of these little scenes connect one way or another into story lines that will play out with the main characters/companions. So going off that some might figure out who this connects to. Really only 2 people that I could be talking about.

This is an original created planet, in that I mean, the planet name when revealed will be from star wars, but their culture, political structure, military, religion etc. will all be fiction made by myself, which is something that evolved from events mentioned in past chapters. Take your best guesses in the comments, sadly I won't be able to confirm or deny whether you are right until a later date.

Finally I know I'm going to get some hate, but I obviously put in a scene about Rey. Yes I will be doing a story line with her. Yes a future version of her, yes a young version of her (Which means I can turn her into anything, don't immediately jump the gun on hate… and yes I have thought about other people in the clone war periods that I could use instead of her. Yes I will be using most of the ones you will list for different story lines, Best example right now Ventress herself.)

Other than that I also think I should mention I might tone down the introduction of new female characters specifically. I mean I feel like I've just been introducing way too many of them. When it came to the 'Golden Twins' in this chapter, I originally had it that they were both sisters, but almost changed it to a brother/sister relationship. It wouldn't change much. It was just after thinking about it, this story really does have a lot of female leads, even though Mace is the main character, I have focused on, Aayla, Nadia, Padme, Jaesa, heck even Rey.

I would like to know what you guys think, I find I've done that with stories in the past, introduce a lot more female characters compared to male ones. Now that's not to say I don't have any Male characters I will be introducing, actually next chapter I'm going to be introducing one. It just seems like there are a lot of females right now. Your thoughts? 

PS. Ventress is like around 12 or something like that for people that are wondering. She is still young and there are 10 years before the start of the clone wars, so lots of time for her to grow.

PPS. For those wondering, the armour used by the Royal Guard is based on the SWTOR Exiled Padawan Armor Set.

Next chapter: Temple Ransacking (Working Title)

Now I'm very tired, excuse me while i go sleep!

Zevren out!

Mace Rook, Dark lord of the Sith, The Emperor’s Wrath, The outlander, The alliance commander, a Person with too many titles to count. On his way back from a mission to quell a group of insurgents the force rages and he and his current crew are flung 4000 Years into the future.

What happens when a crew of powerful force sensitive Sith are flung into the blockade of Naboo? How will the Jedi react to this new force in the Galaxy? How will the Sith? How will Mace and his crew? Will they let the course of the galaxy continue unhindered or will they make changes that reverberate through the force forever. 

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This is an AU based on the game SWTOR, some things have changed, but if you haven't played the game there will be a few spoilers, with character names and affiliations. But as this is an AU they are different from the game characters in some ways.

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This is a very slow release Novel as i have other stories i will be updating. This novel will be worked on when i can't be stuffed with the others. 

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(Disclaimer: I do not own Star Wars or any of their intellectual property. I also do not own Bio Ware or their IP)

(I don’t own the picture displayed. If the original author would like me to take it down please message me and I will gladly do so.)

"This may not be that bad" I said to myself while being dragged outside by Gwen.

"Hey easy there lady, we've got all time 'till your curfew." I said then pulled my hand that she's holding.

She abruptly stopped because of me pulling her. She turned around and looked at me with 'why did you stop me' look.

"Just chill, don't rush, and enjoy it." I said then I gave her a million dollar smile.

"O-ok, then let's go." She stuttered a little then quickly turned away.

"Yeah, let's go!" Now it's my turn to pull he, albeit more gently, to the car.

While we are closing in to the car, I saw Mr. Rogers looking at us with a gentle grandfatherly smile. His smile is so gentle and peaceful.

"Hey young ones, get in the car" he said as we are approaching.

"Ladies first." I said, holding the door open for Gwen.

I looked at her with a smile then winked. She smiled back with a tinge of pink on her cheeks.

"Thank you" she said while entering the car.

I quickly got to the other side of the car and entered, sitting beside Gwen. 
I looked at her, with more attention, to appreciate the beauty sitting beside me.

She's my first date, in both of my lives, and oh boy how I hit the jackpot. 

Just look at her, smoke colored eyes, short blonde hair, beautiful face, awesome body proportion and of course, her bubbly but when it is needed, serious demeanor. 

"You'll get tired of me quickly if you keep looking at me like that." She says as she, too, looks at me then smiled.

'And that damn smile.'

"No, I'll never get tired looking at you. You're beautiful." I said as I don't really know what to reply. 

She's the perfect girl, well at least for me, she is.

The ride to the location of our date took more or less half an hour, and the time right now is 33 minutes before 5.

We are currently lining up for the movie, 'Star Wars: Phantom Menace'

"I didn't know that you're a star wars fan." I said while looking at the line, we're almost in front now.

"Yeah, my dad is a huge fan, he even have a shirt with the autograph of the cast." She said, chuckling at what she said.

(A.N.: This is just me bullshitting my way through)

"Well, I guess the saying 'don't judge a book by its cover' is true. Didn't know the police captain is one of us" I smilingly said.

"One of what?" She's looking at me, intrigued and confused by what I said.

"Nerd" I smirked, then entered the cinema, pulling her hand gently.

===After the Movie===

"That is really one of the best movie" I stated, with a wide smile.

"Yeah, it's so good. And the special effects is awesome too, for that time atleast." She complimented.

As far as this date goes, I think I'm doing great! Why great? C'mon, right from the start we're doing the most lewdest thing in the planet, We're holding hands!!

Ok, jokes aside. I think this date is running on a very good course right now, we're comfortable with each other, little to no awkwardness. What more can I wish?

"You hungry?" I asked her, not because I'm hungry or anything, I just want to ask her if she wants to eat now as it is almost 8 pm.

"Yeah, I'm starving! Where are we going to eat?" She asked me back after giving an affirmation to my question

"What do want to eat? Light meal or something that will really make us full?" I answered her with another question.

She took a thinking posture, tapping her chin.

"Well, I guess I can forget about my diet for today!" She said then smiled at me

'Damn, her smile is so beautiful'

"What do you think about ramen?" I asked her, hoping she'll agree.

"What? You know some good ramen place?" She asked back.

I smiled at her then nodded.
"Yes, so let's go!" I said energetically, pulling her with me as I run.

====Few Minutes Later====

"Old Man Stan's Ramen Shop, the best ramen place that I know" I said with a wide smile, looking at that plain, wooden sign where the shop's name was engraved.

I took Gwen's hand then lead her inside for us to eat. And yes, HE owns this place, that is one of the reason that I love this place, and of course the ramen here is really the best.

"Hey Grandpa Stan! Two orders of the usual!" I yelled while going to 'my' table, I'm really a frequent costumer here that I started to call the usual table that I used as 'my' table.

"Oh! hey young Ivan! Ok, two chashu roll ramen, coming right up!" An old man with a white mustache and genial smile yelled back.

Gwen is looking around with curiosity evident in her eyes. 

"This place is quite neat, not like those ramen shop close to our school." She said, still looking around.

"Yep, Grandpa Stan cleans this place himself. Sometimes the regulars are helping him clean his shop." I said, smiling at the wholesomeness of the place.

We reached our table and sat down, waiting for our food to come.

"Hey, fair warning. The ramen serving here is quite large, so tell me if you can't finish it." I said to her as I know how large the servings here, and I won't really complain as the ramen here really is awesome.

"Don't worry, I said I'll ditch my diet for today" She answered my warning with a mischievous smirk.

"Okay then, don't blame me later ok" I said, with a smirk of my own.

A few minutes passed and our food came, Stan brought it to us himself.

"Here's your food youngsters. I added another half of meat in there, you'll need to eat properly to grow well. Especially you young man." The old man said with a hint of mystery in his voice, putting a tray with two huge bowls of ramen.

If I dodn't know who he is maybe I'll get confused, but I know him, so the mysteries are out and I know what he really mean.

"This is so big!" Gwen exclaimed, eyes wide with shock.

*cough* "That's what she said" *cough* I muttered in between my coughs.

She looked at me, red faced as she realized the other meaning of what she just said. I just laugh at it then gestured to start eating.

We ate for almost an hour and a half, my jaw is kinda painful but it is satisfying nontheless. And to my surprise, Gwen finished the whole serving without any help and wanted to have another one until I mentioned her 'diet' and that caused her to pout. And damn that was cute.

"Wanna go to our last place today?" I looked at her and said with a mysterious smile.

She looked back then flashed a wide smile at me.

"Let's go!" She yelled happily.

Then we make way to our last and final destination for the night.

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Hello guys, I'm back. My health is getting better and better, just some minor headaches but manageable, so expect a slower updates, maybe 1 chapter every other day.

And I want to thank those who reads this thing that I'm writting, I'm just thankful that somebody likes what I'm doing.

Okay, enough of that cheesy lines and get to those that some readers may find a problem.

First of all, those few chapters where I wrote about what happened to runeterra(last part of chapter 13 and the majority of chapter 14) is the 'current timeline', but I did something that will change 'that timeline' as I don't want to spoil the ending that I want. 

You can just think of it as an alternate ending if the mc is not there, but with the mc there, the changes will be massive. 

So expect me to do something that you will never expect.

Oh well, I'm Back!!!

Happy Reading(or not)

A young man in his late teen was killed by a bizarre occurrence while playing the computer game, League of Legends.

What will he do when he is reborn into a world where gods and mortals fight, where world-ending, reality-warping, and universe-conquering beings are roaming around?


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Hello!! The Author here, this is my first story so please go easy on me ok?

I'll try to update frequently but no promises.

So yeah, expect an erratic update schedule.

Happy Reading(or not)

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Disclaimer: I don't own anything in this novel except the Original Characters, the imaginative additions, and the artistic ideas added to the story.
I REPEAT, I don't own ANYTHING except those three things

Cover by: Akatsuki_God

Two days ago, it struck me that I wanted to write a book. I have no experience writting one, hell in the last six years the longest thing I've written has been an email. This story is my sounding board, my laboratory, and my test group. 

There is no major plot at the conception of this adventure. There is only a dream to one day create a world and a timeline such as Star Wars or Warhammer. Where others can build their stories in this world and we can all enjoy in the journeys and adventures that take place.

Spartan
March 18, 2020

All chapters are subject to change; this is a rough draft.

What happens in a world where mortals only gain the power of magic through the consumption of dragon blood? More importantly, how would you react as a dragon, hunted by the creatures you've looked down on throughout your race's entire existence?

Maybe it's time to torch the world to clean out the parasites. A cleansing flame if you would.



The R-15 tag is simply because I find I have a rather gruesome way of describing fight scenes. Wouldnt have a 13 year old watch the beginning of Saving private ryan now would we??

Image is "Fire Drake" by Sansyu
(Fantastic uploads Sansyu)

I post these since a majority of my readers read this story I just want to ask you all some questions I hope you can answer.

I dont plan to drop these stories actually I was going to write my star wars fic but a very negative reviewer cought my attention so I wish to know who else shares his opinions.


Do I have weird Grammar? 

This is his words that I have weird grammar whatever that is supposed to mean.


Edgy mc with edgy music taste?

And lots of edgy clothes he hasn't worn?
 which by the way I do plan on him wearing them again I just didnt want to follow a cartoon character trope.

What I got from this part is my taste in music is bad which I also like music from the 90s 80s and some 70s songs, its just none of this music matches with my story and is not what I listen to alot of now a days since I'm usually not in a good mood.


And he or she asked me is this the type of story where the mc follows the plot but with edgy thoughts.

And a big fat no to this, I have plans for after gravity falls, and everything else I have some ideas how this person has gotten these thoughts but I mean the divergence ein episodes to gain things I even had a chapter planned for meeting the sea monster and finding s ok me uses for it but apparently these aren't good enough, I'm just using these events for a timeline and some will be skipped, or some will.be changed heavily, this is plain and simple, like the manly man episode where Dipper finds those minotaur like creatures which I'll look up the name later will not happen and he will meet them some other way either sooner or later.


And is my mc acting like a wimp and hes on some side quest nobody knows about just to be extra edgy and go back to being a wimp too look normal .

Exactly what the reviewer said do you guys think this aswell because I just wanted to develop his character so he isn't depressing all the time, is being emotional really that bad? I have no clue.


And if you want to see what was said and how I responded I'll five tou his name hes also the only one with a low review of course I will never silence someone like this he or she has the right to an opinion and I just want people to see it and make they're own any other way would just be unfair.

Do let me know what you think please tell me your thoughts on these statements/ questions because I really need the feed back is my story really that bad? Anyways I'll go write my star wars fic and then my Scp one and maybe write some more chapters for my hidden story that I will release some day.


It's just my story that gives me a break from the backlash I get from this story sometimes.


Bye guys I hope I can update this soon.



A heads up the first few chapters maybe confusing but alot of the content in them is explained and will be explained later so bare with them.



Without further ado I give you this stories synopsis.




A boy named Dipper pines goes to a place in Oregon called Gravity falls to see his Gruncle Stan, a few weeks before he has to go to Oregon he discovers this website on the occult, he gives a sacrifice of sorts and utters a chant then he blacks out, and when he wakes up he discovers a book and begins to learn the inner workings of magic, but it's not as simple as that read to find out more.


It's a reincarnation of sorts it was a normal person who was reincarnated no wishes no knowledge nothing but maybe the occasional vision from his past, and who was reincarnated and who reincarnated him that's a secret until its revealed.

And just a heads up it's a darker Dipper, this dipper went through years of being ignored and in that time he trained in some martial arts muay tai and the likes, and due to mor having many social interactions holding him down and other factors he was online and it reading alot researching all manner of subjects until one in particular took his fancy, and that subject was the occult it amazes him with intricacies of magic, demons, and concoctions they wrote these based on science and seemed completely believable, and he started making it his goal to become apart of that world, that seemingly imaginative world, and adventually he got what he desired most, now shall we follow him on his journey.


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Now Here's a quote from my people DO YOU KNOW DAE WAE?

By the way my name is *Tongue click* ELAE and I do know DA WAE.

I know it's a dead meme but it was my favorite meme at the time of writing my old synopsis still is one of my favorites so live with it, my people have spoken.

Anywho jokes aside have a very nice day and enjoy my hard work, that is all I ask for and all I strive for is to write quality content for YOU the reader that is all, I hope this synopsis proves adequate, perhaps it isn't but push on through the first chapters and you will
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