Good pokemon fic! I can see that the fic has a lot of potential while I was reading it, but it's really the creativity of the author that limits the story. I wish the author can take heed to comments and advice since there's currently little to no author-reader interactions in this fic, which I think is very important in the process of creating an amazing fanfic.
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2の人に「いいね!」しました
いいね返事はありません。最初になろう!