It's good. Definitely has the potential to stand next to the most well-known Naruto self-insert fanfictions. I'm so glad the author doesn't have a fourth-grade reading level because finally we have a story with incredibly accurate character adaptations and an MC that has a nuanced and mature understanding of the kind of people these characters are. The MC is a compelling enough character with how he's mature, how he's not edgy, how he's rational, how he cares for people close to him, etc. If I had a problem with this story it's how it's almost like it's confused on what it should show to the reader and what it shouldn't, there are countless times where I wished some things were shown and some weren't, especially in regards to how much this series *tells* us the MC is doing a lot of grueling training behind the scenes, but not actually showing us, leaving the reader to feel like the MC's acquisition of skills sometimes isn't deserved despite how much he probably trained.
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返事はありません。最初になろう!
