Item: Serendipity in the Second Act
Rating: 3.4

lion_gamer_1372Lv112mth

2024-08-28 17:22

I like it in a way i am having some problems

Serendipity in the Second Act

ManangBertha

4.2

54 Chs

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ManangBerthaAuthor

Hello there, thank you so much for the review. Please do not hesitate to let me know what problems about the book you are currently having. I will do my very best to answer any questions, haha. Enjoy reading![img=recommend]

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Hello, people of the world! As shameless as I might have to ask for your review on the book, here I am giving a self review on my book. I just want to say thank you for everyone who had been reading the book despite the slight changes and editing that has been happening from time to time. [*A little side note on the history of this book: I have already written and published this as a short story for a previous competition. And I had deleted it to turn it to a new book (novel) with more chapters than the original plot, giving it a new title and publishing it under a new author name.*] All in all, I will try my very best to finish it until the end and give it a good ending, unlike my other books where I literally screw things up last minute. So, thank you for the support and I hope you will enjoy the book as much as I do.

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