Item: Forsaken By The Gods, I Made A Contract With the Demon King
Rating: 1

sennunLv131mth

2024-10-04 00:03

Tags misleading, he isn’t a villain more like an antihero. Second the name of the novel is a lie he isn’t forsaken he pretty much lost fair and square. It would make more sense to call him a loser instead of forsaken like he is a victim. And the author has this problem of justifying anything the mc does instead of making the reader judge for himself. Hypocrisy is a common theme in this novel, instead of owning up to things he does he acts righteous about it.

Forsaken By The Gods, I Made A Contract With the Demon King

Emberlight

4.5

133 Chs

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Emberlight作者

Firstly, Thanks for giving your precious time on the novel. Coming to the review, I just want to clarify some things. If you have read my review which I pinned on the book - you would notice that I said the tags are given to give me the freedom of writing, that is it will be more of what the book will be when it completes instead of what it is in the start - I don't want to just tell another Villain story, I want to narrate how he became one. So you feeling that the mc feels a little righteousness isn't wrong, that's what it is intended. Secondly, the title. The first half of the title represent Levi's backstory- which I haven't even revealed yet in the story and the second half says about his contract with the demon - again, I don't see a problem in that. Thirdly, it seems my writing style of going into details has become a negative point for the novel - I will work on it, thank you for that. I am not a great author and am definitely not a genius who can weave extraordinary stories, but I am trying to get better and your reviews are helpful in the journey. Thanks for your precious time!

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