Review Detail of Karfin2422 in The Dawn of the Uchiha
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The writing is great, but it has no substance. It’s just saying the same thing over and over again. It feels like someone gave AI a hundred word prompt and told it to make it into 10000 words
The Dawn of the Uchiha
Vivid_Horizons
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It’s pretty much the first 3 chapters, I said the same thing over and over again, I suggest the next time you write you make a timeline of important events for each chapter so you don’t end up saying the same thing again and again
Vivid_Horizons:Which chapter?
Vivid_Horizons作者Vivid_Horizons
Karfin2422:It’s pretty much the first 3 chapters, I said the same thing over and over again, I suggest the next time you write you make a timeline of important events for each chapter so you don’t end up saying the same thing again and again