Not a bad story, but the heavily usage of chat GPT to add more words makes the novel very hard and boring to read...you are a writer bro, just write, idk why are so many "authors" afraid of writing...
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いいねto be fair this is more editing then translating but still I am assuming this is a faloo novel cause Mos t of not all of their fanfic are paid and they have a very exploiting contract that make so they get encouraged to pump up content very fast with a certain word count so they stretch their content a ridiculous amount to get paid and I yes the ai they author is using probably been teached with essay like writing and that clashes so hard with this type of story