Review Detail of flame86_gameplays in Reincarnated with Viltrumite powers (DC/AU)

Okay, as an author I will give myself 5 stars haha, I hope you can help me by commenting on the story and maybe give me some ideas to improve, remember that it is my first serious writing on the page. psdt: everything was translated from the internet, this fanfic is mine, but I wrote it in Spanish, so don't be mad at me.