Review Detail of DaoistCGid7j in Rise of the Monarch | Oregairu x Solo Leveling

The quality of writing in this novel is vastly superior to its predecessor. The story development has been impressive so far. However, it is crucial to enhance the hero's character development alongside other main characters, avoiding the shy demeanor depicted in your previous work. Consider the transformative impact on the protagonist’s mentality, similar to the evolution seen in "Solo Leveling." Maintaining this level of storytelling and ensuring no character is neglected will elevate this novel to a fairy tale masterpiece. Ensure the characters' perspectives are balanced in length—moderate for general scenes and longer for significant events. Despite the peculiar start to the first chapter, I have confidence in your abilities as an author. What do you think about making the image of the main character like the image of the previous novel because it is an ideal image?