Review Detail of Loveishate23 in Blood Oath Betrayal: The Vampire Heiress of Block 21X

Item: Blood Oath Betrayal: The Vampire Heiress of Block 21X
Rating: 2.2

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Loveishate23Lv1415dLoveishate23

It was ok could be better still needs some work it’s feels like it was all over the place

Blood Oath Betrayal: The Vampire Heiress of Block 21X

VileNeon

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VileNeon作者VileNeon

Thank you for the feedback, very valuable. I added in three new chapters at the start(a short arc I had cut prior) and revamped some of the other ones. Still work to do but I'll be hard at it

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Loveishate23Lv14Loveishate23

Your welcome

VileNeon:Thank you for the feedback, very valuable. I added in three new chapters at the start(a short arc I had cut prior) and revamped some of the other ones. Still work to do but I'll be hard at it
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