Review Detail of TranquilShield in Harry's Multiversal Journey

Item: Harry's Multiversal Journey
Rating: 4.6

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TranquilShieldLv54mthTranquilShield

Needs some Editing, lots of little mistakes like calling Legilimancy, Legitimacy or Obliviate, Oblivion but otherwise it's a pretty interesting Oc posses Harry gamer story

Harry's Multiversal Journey

SenseiCaffeine

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SenseiCaffeine作者SenseiCaffeine

Ty, for the info. I paid attention to my Grammar Checker whether it would change the Spell names the first few times, but it came out fine. It seems it changes it from time to time. I corrected what I found.

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VamPyr00Lv2VamPyr00

It is *Legilimency* (with an E) NOT Legilimancy (with an A). The same is true for Occlumency.

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bazooka84Lv7bazooka84

author are you alright

SenseiCaffeine:Ty, for the info. I paid attention to my Grammar Checker whether it would change the Spell names the first few times, but it came out fine. It seems it changes it from time to time. I corrected what I found.

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Dark_WizLv4Dark_Wiz

is it dropped

SenseiCaffeine:Ty, for the info. I paid attention to my Grammar Checker whether it would change the Spell names the first few times, but it came out fine. It seems it changes it from time to time. I corrected what I found.

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applo43Lv14applo43

no it's not

Dark_Wiz:is it dropped

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Dark_WizLv4Dark_Wiz

are you author of fic replying with other account or just saying it .......cause it's not updating anymore while it used to release chap per day previously

applo43:no it's not

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bazooka84Lv7bazooka84

update?

SenseiCaffeine:Ty, for the info. I paid attention to my Grammar Checker whether it would change the Spell names the first few times, but it came out fine. It seems it changes it from time to time. I corrected what I found.

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