First off, good start and good writing. Now, how couldn't someone grow apathetic or some nerve after being stuck in a time loop, tf, if you want to do the Deity route then start from the first chapter only, if you gonna put a timeloop atleast make a character reap some reward from it, other wise its' unnecessary, then you rush to show how much of a bitch he is, by the unnecessary sibling bashing.
Satan03
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いいね返事はありません。最初になろう!