Review Detail of funmaxwell in As a Saiyan, Do I Have Unlimited Potential?

ugh 😩 another one of these they all suck ass. just from the intro alone I can tell you screwed the pacing up and by that I mean how quickly the main character becomes overpowered. As no one who has an IQ over 60 wants to read about some overpowered Gary stew and the only exception to that would be if he was extremely funny. as normal people are more interested in the journey of how he gets there then the destination. I also don't understand why every writer who uses a similar premise to this idea starts there MC out in a major ninja village. as it would probably be better to start the main character out in an unnamed village by the series. As the major villages would have to have been supported by minor farming and fishing villages that didn't have any importance in the series. as these villages are less likely to rat him out as a unique bloodline holder as they are more removed from the propaganda that each ninja village uses. As the way I see it each ninja village is a hub of civilization for their countries like examples New York or Los Angeles or Detroit. as one of the major problems I would imagine with this idea or an ideas similar to it. is that the main character should have a tail like a Saiyan and this should out him as a unique bloodline holder and the problem with that is they're seen as a source of power for the village and since he be the only one they would want to withhold him from any missions that would put him at serious risk of dying and depending on what village they might use him as a breeding stud to bring more of his unique bloodline into the village to increase their military might down the line and most fanfics just brush over this problem like it doesn't exist and that's just terrible.