the world building is interesting and the scenario is quite entertaining but, there are a lot of grammatical errors. They become bad enough that the meaning of sentences are reversed. The best example is the description, that says that the story happens after the manga even though it actually happens during the second great ninja war. If you can ignore those errors, then go ahead and read, it's an entertaining story
l_legolas
4の人に「いいね!」しました
いいね返事はありません。最初になろう!