I can't force myself to read past the first few paragraphs. Sorry. but in the sake of fairness, I'd give it 3. you know in publishing houses, they just read the first paragraph then discard the entire novel if they can't read past it but, this is a webnovel and we're free to post and read. good luck with your work....
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いいね返事はありません。最初になろう!