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The stpry is good but I will be honest It feels like too much in one fanfic .You should have stayed within Marvel and do Emtertaient system there .Marbel itself is vwry big and make it Marvel Multiverse.I get ypu are a fan but mixing everything in one is not good .If you wamt to write a fanfic of Him traveling to the franchises then do another famfic where he travels to the franchises or just make famfic of his franchises while involving him like spinoff . You are introfucing too many things in one story that will only result in it being a catastrophie .The Entertainment part is like a footnote here as it gets never mentioned only how many IPS he got not even public reaction and leading to it ..and also with DC comics and all I mean his father works there and he didnot publish there .Shouldnot there be anything ? Like company pressuring or having Problems with Marc? . And Making a 10 year old write this much is insane .He is not robot .Make it more believable . Also Desvribe the full timeline amd his family bavkground fully well. There are lot of mess . If ypu improve I may remove this review but I am dissapointed the way its going. Do Better. Nothing is detailed and ypu again upgrade a system ? We havent even seen full capabilities and work of system . This is not emtertainemnt system its misleading .. It only shows IP collections nothing else .
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Wild. First of all, Max level is now 3000 (Multiversal level), He is at most Able to destroy a planet right now. the marvel characters are supposed to be more powerful like their comic counterpart. I explained that in the author's section of chapter 12, second, I have repeatedly given examples on how hard it is actually to level up like. even Luke himself knew that thus he used this class quest dungeon opportunity to level up as much as he can. He would stay at this level for a couple of years at most if he doesn't get to visit worlds like tensura and dragon ball. if you genuinely had a problem with it, you would have left a suggestive comment, other readers who comment can testify i try to reply if i can. but you didn't. that makes me think your comment was posted with malicious intent in order to detour people from read this fanfic after they read your comment in this hidden section. I only noticed your comment here because i am usually always checking every part of my fanfic like how many people have read my fanfic yesrterday and if the review got any likes. either way, hopefully you find a story you will enjoy, I don't think my fanfic is unreasonable so far unless someone actually explains it to me.
Gh0st00:not to mention the last chapter he just posted was just ridiculous it was supposed to be a class change or class upgrade but yeti maxed out his level became super freaking powerful when it was just supposed to be for a class he went from level 40 to like 190 something it's a little stupid
Arc_Dragon:I am smoking webnovel and suffering from MTL hatism why ?
