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Seems more and more like it is written by chat gpt the plot seems like an after thought the more u read its cool to actually see a superman in marvel doing superman stuff but i dont see any connection to people he has no one he loves some of the character interactions dont make sense and then their is a flash back that makes him seem like a toddler. Just everything makes it seem like this is a child that got these powers and not a mature adult.
A Superman in Marvel
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I’m not gonna lie I do use chatgpt to help me.I’m really trying to better my writing style and make this a really good story I’m still learning at the moment but trust me the next chapters ahead will be very good.And this is a young Superman that I’m working on he’s still a teenager and the flashbacks I put I’ve done to try and make him look arrogant and more childish but as he finally gains more experience he knows this isn’t a game and tries his best to help..I’m gonna do a rewrite of all the chapters soon probably before the official planet hulk arc but trust me I’m gonna make this readable.