Review Detail of 8ightbit in Hector Marshall : Reborn in Harry Potter

I feel like this story would have been a great read, but ultimately it falls short. Often times it feels like a chore to read with constant repeats of what was already mentioned, constantly reading the same thing over and over again, it just gets too repetitive.. so, if you want a well structured fanfic to read? ignore this one and save yourself some time.