The story is interesting, but it doesn't make sense that MC doesn't get lost when he first enters the dungeon up to the 30th floor
LeoArcadia
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いいねThat was the problem, without some details you killed the whole story, what are you doing there and giving a summary of what you wanted to follow, but the story has no
LeoArcadia:And like i said it's my first time writing and i didn't put too much detail so tnx for your review ill try to edit it and try to add more details.