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Daoist_Kaito
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Oh a real steel fanfic? The premise looks good and as how it'll turn out. I'll give it a proper review after reading more than 10 chapters or so. But take this review as of right now 3.8/5 just based on the premise, synopsis and 5 chapters in.

The Prodigal Son’s Redemption

random_person11

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random_person11作者random_person11

It’s something I’ve been thinking about but there’s no guarantee in anything

Daoist_Kaito:Would you also mind providing some images for the juggernaut as well as the mc, if any?
Daoist_Kaito
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Review time. First off, again the premise is interesting as it gives us another genre and fanfic/novel we're getting here instead of your typical harem/non-harem magic/fantasy/etc. different races kinds of fanfic and novel. Secondly the chapters are a bit long enough to satiate my want for the next chapter as it also doesn't end us in a cliffhanger (though this could change in the future). Thirdly, now we're on to the bad parts of this fanfic which is, we've got no idea of the backstory of the main character and other people other than the ones we've just read (synopsis and previous chapters). There's also almost no world-building being introduced in this chapter other than the already established template/idea of the story we're reading. The pacing is also a problem, the pacing is wack especially for the first chapters where it should introduce us a general idea as to how this fanfic goes in the direction to, there's also a largely lacking dialogue in the story. Like we'd just 2 lines of dialogue from time to time. Additionally the chapters, or how they're written, it's getting repetitive (like how the fight scenes would be similar to the previous ones but worded differently), now mentioning fight scenes, we'd get a very summed up stuff especially the story. Though I'm not sure but I suspect this had been made by or helped created by AI. Overall rating as of chapter 9 is still the same as the first one, 3.8/5. I also warn you that my takes on this story might be different as how you would. This review and rating is based off my standards, how would I review it, rate it, or criticize it. So I should say that you should read 5 chapters to see how it would fit to your tastes. take this review with a grain of salt.

random_person11
random_person11作者random_person11

Thanks for the review I’ll take everything into consideration moving forward

Daoist_Kaito:Review time. First off, again the premise is interesting as it gives us another genre and fanfic/novel we're getting here instead of your typical harem/non-harem magic/fantasy/etc. different races kinds of fanfic and novel. Secondly the chapters are a bit long enough to satiate my want for the next chapter as it also doesn't end us in a cliffhanger (though this could change in the future). Thirdly, now we're on to the bad parts of this fanfic which is, we've got no idea of the backstory of the main character and other people other than the ones we've just read (synopsis and previous chapters). There's also almost no world-building being introduced in this chapter other than the already established template/idea of the story we're reading. The pacing is also a problem, the pacing is wack especially for the first chapters where it should introduce us a general idea as to how this fanfic goes in the direction to, there's also a largely lacking dialogue in the story. Like we'd just 2 lines of dialogue from time to time. Additionally the chapters, or how they're written, it's getting repetitive (like how the fight scenes would be similar to the previous ones but worded differently), now mentioning fight scenes, we'd get a very summed up stuff especially the story. Though I'm not sure but I suspect this had been made by or helped created by AI. Overall rating as of chapter 9 is still the same as the first one, 3.8/5. I also warn you that my takes on this story might be different as how you would. This review and rating is based off my standards, how would I review it, rate it, or criticize it. So I should say that you should read 5 chapters to see how it would fit to your tastes. take this review with a grain of salt.
Daoist_Kaito
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Would you also mind providing some images for the juggernaut as well as the mc, if any?

random_person11:Thanks for the review I’ll take everything into consideration moving forward