Review Detail of the_Penguin in A Sanguine's Adventures
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Hello, author here. This is my first time writing a novel, so expect all kinds of issues that may arise from it. Furthermore, as I am not a native English speaker, you may find grammatical errors in it, so please be a bit tolerant towards me. I will try my best to present something that is, I won't say perfect, but at least presentable. As of now, I don't have a set schedule for releasing chapters, but I will try to upload at least a few chapters per week. Who would have thought that writing a novel would be so difficult? Well, not me, and I've learned it the hard way. 𥲠Anyway, since I've already started writing, might as well see how far I can go. If you have any questions, feel free to ask, and I'll do my best to answer them. enjoy the reading.
A Sanguine's Adventures
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4 chapters out currently, so I don't have much to say. Maybe the plot is moving a little too fast? other authors would transform the content of your 4 chapters into at least 6 or even 10 chapters. I'm not saying it's a bad thing, but if you want to farm a good number of initial chapters, it wouldn't be a bad idea. Of course it depends on how you do it.
I noticed at the beginning, when I was rereading the chapters before publishing them, that the plot seemed a little fast, and I won't deny that I thought about lengthening the chapters, to fit everything I wrote into the first 4- 5 chapters, in more chapters, but I discarded the idea, as I didn't want to shoot myself in the foot and bore the reader already with the first chapters. I'm still new to all this, so I'm learning, and hopefully I can manage the pace of the plot as best I can for the chapters to come.
Dan_Dan_4349:4 chapters out currently, so I don't have much to say. Maybe the plot is moving a little too fast? other authors would transform the content of your 4 chapters into at least 6 or even 10 chapters. I'm not saying it's a bad thing, but if you want to farm a good number of initial chapters, it wouldn't be a bad idea. Of course it depends on how you do it.