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The grammar is all over the place, as is the stories factual information. Nothing seems consistent with Canon details, e.g. baileys vs belli, colonel vs captain, sky gold vs heavenly gold. I like the premise of the story, however the incorrect details in the story from canon, without any forewarning or explanation has put me off. If this is a translation, the author should be noticing and fixing these issues, or getting a Beta reader to do it for them.

One Piece: I'm Yamamoto Genryusai

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chinese fanfic trash google trad

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Nautical, Retired Veterans, Awakening Yamamoto Genryūsai Template this is org. name