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The grammar is really bad. It's also hard to tell who's talking a lot of the times, there needs do be less of those long paragraphs because it makes the dialogue difficult to read. But besides all that I am enjoying it so far and I hope the author continues and improves.

Supreme artist system (new life old dreams)

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i will try to do something about the dialogue and for the grammar i used grammarly to correct it as much as i could since English is not my main language and i am still learning but i will get better also thank you !