Proper nouns and Pronouns are a mess, also MC kept calling the tavern owner Dad like he's on modern civilization. Also, that's not his dad. Village name, also untranslated. Dialogues are your typical CN quotes like "...that depends on your ability". The whole ASOIAF vibe is just not there.
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13の人に「いいね!」しました
いいね返事はありません。最初になろう!