Review Detail of flowing_clouds in Interstellar Manufacturer

is it a fic/novel/translation

this is novel,thank you

ooh... ok, there are not many who post whole novel in fic section, that's why got confused

a little bit of a major criticism is that I can't read past 1st page because of the grammar and writing style pls do the editing ASAP or get help of software and proof read it before posting please I hope to here the good news soon

I actually want to read this novel as it seems interesting but the grammar is rough man. Work on your English grammar or use some kind of software to help you write. Good luck bro

I'll make improvements.

good for you, I am adding it to the library again, so please edit or at lest proofread all the chapters if possible .

half of it has become OK I think, but still the other half needs correction, please do the corrections as soon as possible, because the immersion is being cut short because of the simplest mistakes. Also, if possible proofread it to see if there is any mistakes.

half of it has become OK I think, but still the other half needs correction, please do the corrections as soon as possible, because the immersion is being cut short because of the simplest mistakes. Also, if possible proofread it to see if there is any mistakes.

Hello. I've been making corrections.

Corrected to 70

Thank you, I'm new to this, and the novel may be flawed, so feel free to correct me!

let me see and reply.

let me read till how much I feel it's corrected and will make a reply soon

bro 2nd chapter is very hard to read with errors and repeated sentences, check those

Amended and completed

lemme see

Okay, I have reached the 20th chapter, and so far, it is readable, but it is not entirely correct. That said, it is much better than before.

OK