Review Detail of noob6 in Rise of Death's Advocate(Paused)

I'll honest the first review was the biggest I've ever told in my entire, wait that's a lie too but anyway it should among the biggest lies I've ever told but definitely not the best. If you've read the rise of deaths advocate by the noob3 then you're in luck because this was written by the same author and the same book. Also you notice that I have a very bad of throwing in tragedies and conflicts without thinking but I intend to change that with this redo of the awesome story. Don't mind the ratings just another one of my terrible habits. I know the start of the story will not be to the taste of most readers but as an author who has watched and read many tragic stories it gets to a point where I begin to question who the actual villain is the reader or the fictional character who decided to destroy because of the way the writer decided to portray but no matter how you see it the writer's always in the middle of everything and as a writer I would choose to be the villain in a story no matter the circumstance. All I want to do is write a first thirty chaps of the main character getting to know the main cast and right after that my villainous side will kick in. So if it's that side of me that you're waiting I beg you to be a little more patient and trust me you'll see it.