Review Detail of XAZVAPB0OTH in Marvel: The Son of Odin

Item: Marvel: The Son of Odin
Rating: 1.4

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XAZVAPB0OTHLv45mthXAZVAPB0OTH

the Author took a trip to the future using Sakar, without even knowing how time works in Sakar, not to mention that the name Cesar for a Nordic protagonist is rubbish, but the time jump used in Sakar was terrible, the original author messed it up the story with this plot hole

Marvel: The Son of Odin

Mystic_Verse

6の人に「いいね!」しました

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SeductiveWildPussyLv3SeductiveWildPussy

I fuly agree kkkkkk

5mth

MelshanLv7Melshan

Yes, the author kind of made me lose 50% of interest in reading his Fanfic with this, I hate NERF.

5mth