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Review Detail of WaitWhoWhat in Reborn in Naruto with Bleach System

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WaitWhoWhat
WaitWhoWhatLv133mthWaitWhoWhat

The story isn't good, unfortunately. The character is some bland nonsensical edgy mess that somehow develops in a direction that doesn't make sense. The characters of the original are completely abnormal. Somehow, he doesn't have any chakra, which makes no sense. I'm not sure how this story is up here, and I know my review seems harsh, but there is a lot of progress to be made before this can be considered even decent. No hate towards the author, of course, as making an attempt to write a story is a commendable feat in itself. Overall, in its current state, it's not something I'd recommend reading as of now.

Reborn in Naruto with Bleach System

TheCarpe

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TheCarpe
TheCarpe作者TheCarpe

Sorry, will fix that.

Hiroton:I couldn't read past chapter 3 due to how bad the grammar is...
TheCarpe
TheCarpe作者TheCarpe

Thank you for your review and sorry to disappoint you like this, this novel was purely ‘accidental’ but somehow took off. :]

WaitWhoWhat
WaitWhoWhatLv13WaitWhoWhat

That makes sense, I guess I was just looking for a good story when there wasn't meant to be one.

TheCarpe:Thank you for your review and sorry to disappoint you like this, this novel was purely ‘accidental’ but somehow took off. :]
TheCarpe
TheCarpe作者TheCarpe

You could at least try to read the rest, you will not find a good story on a whim so you may as well give this a chance if you haven’t. Do as you wish tho.

WaitWhoWhat:That makes sense, I guess I was just looking for a good story when there wasn't meant to be one.
Hiroton
HirotonLv13Hiroton

I couldn't read past chapter 3 due to how bad the grammar is...

CellsAutisticBro
CellsAutisticBroLv3CellsAutisticBro

don't worry I will give it a shot because you are a good spotrtand can take criticism, good work man

TheCarpe:Sorry, will fix that.